Lazy River
ABC Poetry30 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ABC poem about the cool, lazy river, that flows down towards the ocean at a slow pace. We sometimes need to go with the flow instead of fugh ting against the flow.
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A very well-written ABC poem about the cool, lazy river, that flows down towards the ocean at a slow pace. We sometimes need to go with the flow instead of fugh ting against the flow.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Well said, Sandra. We need to go with the flow. Thanks for the great review.
Melissa
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Ahhhhh.... the lazy river to relax us on this stifling day: i would gladly grab a tube and join you on your journey, Lady Melissa!! :) ;) A wonderful offering for the contest, ma'am -- thank you for sharing the 'lazy smile' for the afternoon! ;) Good Luck! Yvette
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Ahhhhh.... the lazy river to relax us on this stifling day: i would gladly grab a tube and join you on your journey, Lady Melissa!! :) ;) A wonderful offering for the contest, ma'am -- thank you for sharing the 'lazy smile' for the afternoon! ;) Good Luck! Yvette
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Thank you, dear Yvette... yes, it is a lazy summer afternoon here. I am glad you liked this one.
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm loving the near rhymes, just perfect and inventive Melissa, your poetry is going from strength to strength, much enjoyed, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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I'm loving the near rhymes, just perfect and inventive Melissa, your poetry is going from strength to strength, much enjoyed, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Awww.... Dolly, you have made my day. Thanks so much for the encouragment and review. :)
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
Your Q,R,S,T and U words are excellent to stars your lines. Your poem suggests the relaxation and tranquility the river brings. You've created a peaceful atmosphere. The rhyme makes a nice plus. This is very atmospheric, and best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Your Q,R,S,T and U words are excellent to stars your lines. Your poem suggests the relaxation and tranquility the river brings. You've created a peaceful atmosphere. The rhyme makes a nice plus. This is very atmospheric, and best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Hi Judi. Thank you, dear friend, for this lovely review. I am feeling lazy today and thought this one described my mood. (I also happen to be at the pool)... haha. Thanks much!
Melissa
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You're welcome. Sounds like you were enjoying your day. judi
Comment from Sally Law
Since I am unable to do this right now, I'll read your relaxing poem and have a visual vacation. Thank you for this and my best in the ABC Poetry Contest.
Sally xo
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Since I am unable to do this right now, I'll read your relaxing poem and have a visual vacation. Thank you for this and my best in the ABC Poetry Contest.
Sally xo
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Hi Sally... I wrote this one while I am at the pool. I did all of those things while imagining myself on a lazy river. Alas, no shade today!! I am gonna need the aloe Vera. LOL
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You are fair like me!!
Comment from country ranch writer
A very nice presentation for this one love the water and relaxing by the water is a great refresher to start ones day. Peaceful and relaxing is what I would do there and maybe catch a fish or two hehe.
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A very nice presentation for this one love the water and relaxing by the water is a great refresher to start ones day. Peaceful and relaxing is what I would do there and maybe catch a fish or two hehe.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Haha... catch a fish too. My aunt thinks that fishing is the most relaxing thing you can do. Thanks so much for the review!
Melissa
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It is so relaxing! Fish are yummy too!
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Haha... catch a fish too. My aunt thinks that fishing is the most relaxing thing you can do. Thanks so much for the review!
Melissa
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Smiles
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Sugarray77
Smiles to your ABC poem of the relaxing mood you found
Upon a lazy river, beneath a shady limb.
Best to you in the contest.
Gert
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Hello Sugarray77
Smiles to your ABC poem of the relaxing mood you found
Upon a lazy river, beneath a shady limb.
Best to you in the contest.
Gert
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Hi Gert... thanks so very much!! I am feeling lazy today. Haha.
Melissa
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You are so welcome country ranch writer Sugarray77
Gert
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Hi Gert... thanks so very much!! I am feeling lazy today. Haha.
Melissa
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Smiles you are welcome
Gert
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
You speak out the truth, a true reflection of your mind, you sometime think so, to take rest from your routine job, and relax or retire or proceed lazily freely and restfully; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write to Inspire, Change.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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You speak out the truth, a true reflection of your mind, you sometime think so, to take rest from your routine job, and relax or retire or proceed lazily freely and restfully; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write to Inspire, Change.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Thanks for this lovely review, Dr. A!!
Melissa
Comment from Janetsue
I truly love this. I would love to be inside that picture right now. Your words and visual image are a perfect match. Peace and relaxation are absolutely oozing from your excellent posting!
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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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I truly love this. I would love to be inside that picture right now. Your words and visual image are a perfect match. Peace and relaxation are absolutely oozing from your excellent posting!
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Hi Spangle. Thanks for your insightful words. I really appreciate it.
Melissa
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You're very welcome, Melissa! XO Janet
Comment from June Sargent
Up a lazy river...that's where I want to be! Summer is coming to an end as kids get ready to go back to school. And I'm going to try and enjoy these last days of warmth...I just don't live near a river. I enjoyed the read. God job.
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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Up a lazy river...that's where I want to be! Summer is coming to an end as kids get ready to go back to school. And I'm going to try and enjoy these last days of warmth...I just don't live near a river. I enjoyed the read. God job.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2019
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Hi June... I wrote this while I am at the pool ... swimming, floating and closing my eyes to the sun... I just imagined I was at the River. Haha. Thanks much!
Melissa
