Innocence
a 5-7-5 poem18 total reviews
Comment from zanya
A-h-h an interesting angle on innocence - a quality that seems to be disappearing from our world - with a descrptive adjective here and a super pic to illustrate
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A-h-h an interesting angle on innocence - a quality that seems to be disappearing from our world - with a descrptive adjective here and a super pic to illustrate
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the innocence of a child who will have no fear to get closer to any animal and they never thought they may get hurt.
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the innocence of a child who will have no fear to get closer to any animal and they never thought they may get hurt.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adored this 5-7-5, it is poignant, honest and pure, this kind of innocence is so cute as each being has the same curiosity, magical, best wishes, love Dolly x
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I adored this 5-7-5, it is poignant, honest and pure, this kind of innocence is so cute as each being has the same curiosity, magical, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Mark D. R.
A delightful verse and imagery you have created. Your small child has that wonderful innocence that we all aspire to.
Not that it affects my review, via my iPhone, but your last line in my portrait "look" becomes two lines of text. It is AOK in landscape mode. No answer to that issue.
Best wishes for your contest entry.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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A delightful verse and imagery you have created. Your small child has that wonderful innocence that we all aspire to.
Not that it affects my review, via my iPhone, but your last line in my portrait "look" becomes two lines of text. It is AOK in landscape mode. No answer to that issue.
Best wishes for your contest entry.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much... I was hoping you would put in a contest entry!
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I did not have enough FS money to do when I posted earlier and missed the new contest announcement. Que sera, sera.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. The content is beautifully constructed creating a vivid scene of tranquility. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. The content is beautifully constructed creating a vivid scene of tranquility. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Janetsue
This is a fabulous posting with words and picture creating a beautiful scene of total innocence. It is beautiful to look at and read. It prompts an immediate sigh of appreciation from the reader.
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This is a fabulous posting with words and picture creating a beautiful scene of total innocence. It is beautiful to look at and read. It prompts an immediate sigh of appreciation from the reader.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much, Donna.
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:-)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Mystery Writer. The picture is a full statement of innocence and was well chosen for the poem. Bambi approaching the child is a visual description of the verse.
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reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer. The picture is a full statement of innocence and was well chosen for the poem. Bambi approaching the child is a visual description of the verse.
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Great description, Robert. Thanks much!
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You're welcome
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Excellent. Isn't it strange how animals, domestic or wild, seem
to take to small children but run or eat adults? I've seen children walk up to animal cages at zoos and seem to have a calming effect on the animals. Very good work.
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Excellent. Isn't it strange how animals, domestic or wild, seem
to take to small children but run or eat adults? I've seen children walk up to animal cages at zoos and seem to have a calming effect on the animals. Very good work.
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Comment Written 15-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2019
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Thank you very much!
