You Can Nibble My Prawn
A pun-ishing poem for your perusal.14 total reviews
Comment from jenintorre
This poem is so cleverly written and entertaining that it really deserves six stars. I think you should do very well in the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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This poem is so cleverly written and entertaining that it really deserves six stars. I think you should do very well in the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your superb review rating!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Superb, witty, funny. The rhyme and rhythm are perfect. The journey throughout different rivers of the world and the various pains that the prawn encounters or the other visitors along the road are:"I'm not sqquiding you right now," deserves a six-star. Good luck with the Contest.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Superb, witty, funny. The rhyme and rhythm are perfect. The journey throughout different rivers of the world and the various pains that the prawn encounters or the other visitors along the road are:"I'm not sqquiding you right now," deserves a six-star. Good luck with the Contest.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for the 'rave review' and your good luck wishes. I hope other people have my sense of humour (and yours) and enjoy it as much.
Comment from royowen
An excellent poem, a greatly inventive post, that plays with popular sayings, a really coming together the raw prawn sprayings, really playing with flings, making platypuses out sedentary clings, and really tolling this tell tail poison all a cloutit, well done, a very clever post, both entertaining and challenging, well done, blessings, Roy
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An excellent poem, a greatly inventive post, that plays with popular sayings, a really coming together the raw prawn sprayings, really playing with flings, making platypuses out sedentary clings, and really tolling this tell tail poison all a cloutit, well done, a very clever post, both entertaining and challenging, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for this excellent review, Roy.
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Most welcome
Comment from JLR
Whimsical and fully engaging beginning with the great graphic and the challenging dialectic meter throughout the poem. Crafted by a humorist of the first order. Write on and write often.
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reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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Whimsical and fully engaging beginning with the great graphic and the challenging dialectic meter throughout the poem. Crafted by a humorist of the first order. Write on and write often.
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Comment Written 18-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
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You can tell I had a bit of fun writing this! Thanks for wading through it; I appreciate your review.
