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Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2

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Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings

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Comment from country ranch writer
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Lucky ducky is lucky he has you I his corner and thought to get him a kiddie pool to cool off in. A very lucky ducky indeed. Nicely put together my friend.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments, on my Interuputation of the phot6. These types of Team Member Challenges are Great.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute poem you have penned to go with the Club Entry Cooling off event. You used very good descriptive words. Please check this one thing:
I've Been Wandering around Wondering What to I Can Do?
Wondering What (take out to) I can do.

I enjoyed reading and reviewing this very much! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
    Thank you for the review and correction. I will review and revise based on the overall notes with this poem.
    Blessings!
Comment from Cindy Warren
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That's cute. He probably feels safer in the small pool. Hopefully he'll stop honking now. In your second last line did you mean he quiet down instead of quite?

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2019

reply by the author on 18-Aug-2019
    Yes, Thank you for the review and noticed error. Blessings