Erik
Schizophrenia8 total reviews
Comment from Mia Twysted
This sounds like you are talking about me and some other members of my family.
Sometimes you get lost in your own head that you are just gone from the world. It is difficult to deal with the voices.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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This sounds like you are talking about me and some other members of my family.
Sometimes you get lost in your own head that you are just gone from the world. It is difficult to deal with the voices.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thank you for this kind review. I'm glad you have connected with this piece.
Comment from rockmann
My, so very well written. It is apparent that this is written from the heart, and not just another poem. My son has mental problems as well, so I can somewhat relate. Hope he is well, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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My, so very well written. It is apparent that this is written from the heart, and not just another poem. My son has mental problems as well, so I can somewhat relate. Hope he is well, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. It can be hard at times but we are lucky to have them in our lives. Thank you for the six star rating.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your sedoka is well-written, heart-wrenching, and descriptive. You have addressed a condition, that can cause a wide range of situations and emotions
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Your sedoka is well-written, heart-wrenching, and descriptive. You have addressed a condition, that can cause a wide range of situations and emotions
Comment Written 21-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for this nice review. I really appreciate it.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a lovely, though very sad poem about your son's mental illness. I have depression as well as hallucinations from sleep deprivation at times. Thank you for sharing this. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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This is a lovely, though very sad poem about your son's mental illness. I have depression as well as hallucinations from sleep deprivation at times. Thank you for sharing this. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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I'm sorry that you have some similar problems. Thank you for reading and God bless.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow .. Schizophrenia is certainly it's own form of torture...and, as you so clearly illustrate here, not just for the person thrown into emotional upheavals in its waves... A wonderful offering for the contest - good luck! ;)
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Wow .. Schizophrenia is certainly it's own form of torture...and, as you so clearly illustrate here, not just for the person thrown into emotional upheavals in its waves... A wonderful offering for the contest - good luck! ;)
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your kind words, and the very nice review. :)
Comment from Cheryl I
I suffer from hearing voices, sometimes. They come for a while, then they leave. I never know when they will return. I feel sad for your son. It is horrible to have your mind play tricks on you. Nice job.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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I suffer from hearing voices, sometimes. They come for a while, then they leave. I never know when they will return. I feel sad for your son. It is horrible to have your mind play tricks on you. Nice job.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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I'm sorry this happens to you...thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Great presentation in artwork and your words about this terrible disease - schizophrenia. The second stanza in particular, dramatic, heart wrenching. Good luck in the contest, thanks for sharing.
cheers.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Great presentation in artwork and your words about this terrible disease - schizophrenia. The second stanza in particular, dramatic, heart wrenching. Good luck in the contest, thanks for sharing.
cheers.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
Comment from john mallahan
What a statement about our world! Am so sorry if this is a pattern you have to live with. Sometimes wonder what the world would be like if everybody was the same. Not sure, there would be the same zing...
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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What a statement about our world! Am so sorry if this is a pattern you have to live with. Sometimes wonder what the world would be like if everybody was the same. Not sure, there would be the same zing...
Comment Written 20-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2019
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I wouldn't want everyone the same...but it would be nice if mental illness could go away and leave us to live our individual lives. Thank you so much for reading. :)
