Always You
Now and Forever9 total reviews
Comment from AprilViolet
What can I say about this poem but wow! You never cease to amaze me with your excellent use of imagery. Wonderful love poem, you definitely have a knack for writing them!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
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What can I say about this poem but wow! You never cease to amaze me with your excellent use of imagery. Wonderful love poem, you definitely have a knack for writing them!
Comment Written 22-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2020
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You are so kind. I appreciate you reading my poem.
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
This is a very clever and creative poem. The rhyming is impeccable and unforced which allows the poem to flow effortlessly. The syllable count is excellent. "That love is in my eyes as well, once scared of falling, now I fell". That's perfectly beautiful. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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This is a very clever and creative poem. The rhyming is impeccable and unforced which allows the poem to flow effortlessly. The syllable count is excellent. "That love is in my eyes as well, once scared of falling, now I fell". That's perfectly beautiful. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review.
Comment from RodG
I enjoyed this passionate love poem which is extremely SENSUAL, not erotic. The speaker expresses how he is smitten by her and enthralled throughout a lifetime together. I really enjoyed the content, but I will never be a fan of rhyming couplets. Rod
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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I enjoyed this passionate love poem which is extremely SENSUAL, not erotic. The speaker expresses how he is smitten by her and enthralled throughout a lifetime together. I really enjoyed the content, but I will never be a fan of rhyming couplets. Rod
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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Thank you for reading, I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from amada
This is a very passionate poem, just like the contest ordered. It flows very well, some of its lines remind me of Pablo Neruda's works, he is one of my favorite poems. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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This is a very passionate poem, just like the contest ordered. It flows very well, some of its lines remind me of Pablo Neruda's works, he is one of my favorite poems. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2020
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I'll have to look him up. Thank you so much for this nice review.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful presentation for the contest... a few catches below... ;) :) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
that's in you eyes --> that's in your eyes
now I've fell --> incorrect english here.... really is a 'speed bump' in your wonderful flow... :(
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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A wonderful presentation for the contest... a few catches below... ;) :) Thanx for sharing and good luck! ;)
that's in you eyes --> that's in your eyes
now I've fell --> incorrect english here.... really is a 'speed bump' in your wonderful flow... :(
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thank you for reading my poem and for the valuable advice....I've already made the changes. :)
Comment from Sara R.
Great poem. Full of love. The person you love is fortunate and feels fortunate to receive your love in return. Sometimes words cannot express all we feel for someone, but your words are of a person in love. Keep loving and writing.
Sara R.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Great poem. Full of love. The person you love is fortunate and feels fortunate to receive your love in return. Sometimes words cannot express all we feel for someone, but your words are of a person in love. Keep loving and writing.
Sara R.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thank you for such a nice review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A passionate and sensual write filled with two lovers in a warm and sexual embrace, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes . . . . love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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A passionate and sensual write filled with two lovers in a warm and sexual embrace, I wish you luck with the contest, best wishes . . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thank you for reading and for such a nice review.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a 'Passionate Love in Back and White.'
Prompt entry rich and Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a Blessed week.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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This is a 'Passionate Love in Back and White.'
Prompt entry rich and Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a Blessed week.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thank you for reading my poem and for such a great review. :)
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like the sincerity behind this poem. My favorite lines are:
A twisted puzzle, such delight!
Entangled sweetly in the night.
With the line:
once scared of falling, now I've fell.
I think you can just put "once scared of falling, now I fell."
Very appropriate post!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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I like the sincerity behind this poem. My favorite lines are:
A twisted puzzle, such delight!
Entangled sweetly in the night.
With the line:
once scared of falling, now I've fell.
I think you can just put "once scared of falling, now I fell."
Very appropriate post!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your positive and helpful feedback.
