Haiku (beneath harvest moon)
Poem Haiku2 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
This almost a pure Haiku. The last line is not quite a satori, but it has the Haiku feel with 'harvest moon' and the nature element. Do like how your selected artwork reinforces your verse.
tawny owl, betimes, and 'owlish serenade are nice word selections!
Best wishes for your entry.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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This almost a pure Haiku. The last line is not quite a satori, but it has the Haiku feel with 'harvest moon' and the nature element. Do like how your selected artwork reinforces your verse.
tawny owl, betimes, and 'owlish serenade are nice word selections!
Best wishes for your entry.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Great review - zanya
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting use of "owlish" which is reminiscent of "ghoulish" and with "serenade" it gives a nice satori effect. Lovely picture, too. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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Interesting use of "owlish" which is reminiscent of "ghoulish" and with "serenade" it gives a nice satori effect. Lovely picture, too. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2019
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A superb review - one worth reading !zanya
