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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Looks like Nicholas is in for quite an adventure and will have to watch his p's and q's. so as not to upset Constantine. Love the rolling punk ball/ armadillo.
Very visual chapters Yvette.
Cheers
Valda

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2025
    He's a bit testy.... but gnomes do tend to be... so I'm told! ;) :) Thank you, Valda, for hanging there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Karen Cherry
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Good entertaining writing. I never really read fantasy until I got here. I am enjoying these stories delivered in bite size portions. You leave us wanting more. Karen :-)

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
    Well, there's always more when the crazy blonde's involved... just you wait and see! ;) Take care and stay warm! ;) Yvette
Comment from pome lover
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my, my, what an imagination you have, said the big bad wolf :)
a pink armadillo. well, why not? this is getting interestinger and interestinger. and you are getting all kinds of awards!
Congrats!
Katharine

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2025

reply by the author on 21-Jan-2025
    I promise there was no alcohol involved... just the crazy blonde! ;) Yvette
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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It sounds like Constantine is quite the character....I can just picture him standing, tossing his hat behind the cabinet, trying to get the groundskeeper attention. I think he kind of wants to be the groundskeeper's friend.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020
    Oh, a true character he is, my lady -- glad he caught your attention! ;)
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
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A pink ball that turns into an armadillo? This is so much fun!
And who else would beat up a file cabinet, but the infamous G-Trash!
Halt, you Heathens? You have left me in suspense.

 Comment Written 10-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Gotta keep those pre-teen attentions that are used to video games and such!! ;) Thanx so much for your 'joining in', my lady! ;) Yvette
reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 16-Oct-2020
    Oh yeah, I never thought of that! I don't have teenagers (or any kids at all), but that's so true. You're welcome, dear Yvette, as always.
    - Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from RShipp
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I greatly enjoy the character 'Constantine' !

A pink ninja-like armadillo? Wow! Do all authors 'indulge' for their writing? Hehehe!

 Comment Written 09-Oct-2020

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2020
    Constantine is my 'little ol man'.... and, yeah, I couldn't resist Sir Archibald as soon as the idea occured... :) :)
Comment from robyn corum
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Y,

Another lovely chapter with all the same sort of delicious ingredients one has come to expect from you. *smile*

Notes - for you to use or toss, as you wish:
1.) "Hey!" (h)e interjected excitedly, waving his hand back and forth.

2.) "Do I look like the kind of fella that would beat up an unsuspecting cabinet?!"
--> aaaccctually, you're only supposed to use one form of punctuation in each setting. I understand this is for a younger crowd, though. Hmmm...

Thanks so much - moving on...

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2020

reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
    Hooray for the second set of eyes -- you rock, my lady!! ;) Hope you've got a fun weekend on tap -- the weather is going to be fantastic! ;) Enjoy!! ;)
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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The garden shed reveals more of its secrets. This is a novel that is racing along in its own small corner of the world - you prove that you can pack a lot of action into a mere five hundred words.

 Comment Written 13-May-2020

reply by the author on 14-May-2020
    Let's just say that keeping the total around 500 is a challenge for this fantasy girl! ;) LOL! Thanx so much for continue to journey with Nicholas and crew, Lady Kat! ;) Keep on smiling over there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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C3 - A Little Bit of a Tantrum
by Y. M. Roger

Hello, Yvette, so... what's in the cabinet? LoL I enjoyed this chapter too. Your story is engaging... well done my friend.

Gypsy

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
    Thanx so much, Gypsy.... guess we'll have to see if it's what Sir Phillipe said it would be... ;)
Comment from Lu Saluna
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This garden and shed are full of surprises. A pink armadillo no less. And who is that lighting the shed? The rose bush. I love a good fantasy story.
And this is a good one.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2020

reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
    So glad you're enjoying... it is certainly an adventure to follow!! ;) :)