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Proboscis Monkey and Baboon

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This write made me laugh, this is a strange looking monkey and his nose is used in a sexual way because he can seek a mate with his nose! Your write is funny and I enjoyed reading, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 02-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
    I think that monkey got put together on a Friday when God was tired and got the ends mixed up.
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Ha ha ha. This great poem really made me laugh. I love it. The photo is a scream. The opening lines are priceless. This should do really well in the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.

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 Comment Written 02-Sep-2019


reply by the author on 02-Sep-2019
    That's a great reaction! I was a bit worried it was too rude, but what the hell, I thought it was funny myself.