Always Another Line
Don't try to find the words, let them find you...42 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Always Another Line" is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. Woven through each line are the golden threads of truth. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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"Always Another Line" is short, succinct and very much to the point. With a minimum of words, this talented poet has told it as it is. Woven through each line are the golden threads of truth. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thanx so much for the wonderful review, Duchess -- here's hoping that the warmer weather starts to seek you out soon! ;):) Take care - Yvette
Thank you Yvette, my pen-pushing possum.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess :)))
Comment from karenina
Some of the best of all art forms are forged from angst! Pain longs for expression. We can put a hammer through a wall...or, as authors we can channel our fury, sorrow, loss, depression, etcetera into (often) some of our best work!--Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Some of the best of all art forms are forged from angst! Pain longs for expression. We can put a hammer through a wall...or, as authors we can channel our fury, sorrow, loss, depression, etcetera into (often) some of our best work!--Karenina
Comment Written 04-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Best. Therapy. Ever. :) :) Even if it's just wrestling with rhyme or two, it's a great way to 'burn stress' and more! ;) Thanx for the review, Karenina -- take care and GREAT to hear from you!! ;) Yvette
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You know I love your writing...you'll hear from me often!--Karenina
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I SO agree! When I'm in a state of flux I pick up my pen!---Karenina
Comment from Sally Law
Oh crap, I was going to enter this contest. Now I think I just enjoy yours instead. This is beautifully formatted and a lovely offering for the 3 line poetry contest. Sending you my best today from hurricane central. Sally xo
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Oh crap, I was going to enter this contest. Now I think I just enjoy yours instead. This is beautifully formatted and a lovely offering for the 3 line poetry contest. Sending you my best today from hurricane central. Sally xo
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Hey, guess what? I missed the cinquain one the same way: suddenly, I missed it!! ;) LOL! Must be something about our blonde genes or something... or, perhaps, yours would have A LOT to do with the hurricane and mine is just blonde...!! ;) :) Take care and thanx for the review! ;) Yvette
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Nope, it?s blonde all right.
Comment from Sugarray77
Very good, Yvette. I really like your satori... Life's fractured refrain... that phrase says so much. this is a perfect entry for the 3 Line poem... well done and I wish you splendid good luck!! :)
Melissa
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Very good, Yvette. I really like your satori... Life's fractured refrain... that phrase says so much. this is a perfect entry for the 3 Line poem... well done and I wish you splendid good luck!! :)
Melissa
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thank you for this great review, Melissa... so very appreciated! ;) Yvette
Comment from Cindy Warren
Of course. Where would we be without sad poetry, or sad songs? Something needs to inspire them. It can be heartbreaking when dreams fall apart, but it does make for great poetry. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Of course. Where would we be without sad poetry, or sad songs? Something needs to inspire them. It can be heartbreaking when dreams fall apart, but it does make for great poetry. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Thanx for your review! ;)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Yvette!
I would have to say that "shattered dreams" always "sing songs to the poet's pen!" My students used to ask me why poems and short stories were most often about sadness/pathos. I would share that deep emotion and conflict captivate the reader's attention. Indeed, "Life's fractured refrain."
Beautiful...
diane
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Hello Yvette!
I would have to say that "shattered dreams" always "sing songs to the poet's pen!" My students used to ask me why poems and short stories were most often about sadness/pathos. I would share that deep emotion and conflict captivate the reader's attention. Indeed, "Life's fractured refrain."
Beautiful...
diane
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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captures the reader's attention since it first broke the writer's heart... :) ;) Writing is such therapy sometimes, isn't it?! ;) :) If nothing else, wrestling with the rhymes sometimes is a good workout of frustrations!! ;) Thanx for the review, my Beautiful Michigan Friend! ;) Yvette
Comment from Carla Trinklein
Life's "fractured refrain" usually inspires the best poetry. You are right, poetry is balm to a shattered spirit. Writers are blessed in that they can sooth their own souls through words.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Life's "fractured refrain" usually inspires the best poetry. You are right, poetry is balm to a shattered spirit. Writers are blessed in that they can sooth their own souls through words.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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You are so very right about that one, Lady C -- and our pen is great therapy through it all! ;) Thanx for the review on this one and take care! ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Hitcher
Nice and oh so true Yvette, for the intensity of emotions, be they good, bad, scorching hot or freezing cold can illuminate a poets pen like nothing else. This is a very cool offering for the contest friend and I think it has got to be a serious contender : )) Good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Nice and oh so true Yvette, for the intensity of emotions, be they good, bad, scorching hot or freezing cold can illuminate a poets pen like nothing else. This is a very cool offering for the contest friend and I think it has got to be a serious contender : )) Good luck!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Thanx so much for the wonderful review here, Hitch... and we can certainly convey all sorts of 'temperature' can't we? :) :) Take care over there! ;) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
Yes! Very well expressed. "Life's fractured refrain" from all those "shattered dreams" often do serve the poet as well as muse. It's what connects our verses to other humans.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Yes! Very well expressed. "Life's fractured refrain" from all those "shattered dreams" often do serve the poet as well as muse. It's what connects our verses to other humans.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Thanx so much for your review on this one, Helen -- much appreciated! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
I see excellent use of all syllables in this thought-provoking, realistic
piece. There must be a degree of realism in our poems. Writing only of
successes and bliss--well, to me, just falls short.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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I see excellent use of all syllables in this thought-provoking, realistic
piece. There must be a degree of realism in our poems. Writing only of
successes and bliss--well, to me, just falls short.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2019
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Thanx so much for your review on this one, Janice -- much appreciated! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
