eyes of blue
a 1 6 1 poem.2 total reviews
Comment from CrystieCookie999
I like how you got end rhymes in every line! Wow. That being said, I had to think for a while to figure out how eyes might 'arch.' I think usually the saying has to do with arching eyebrows. Although when my niece smiles, her eyes look like happy arching half-moons. And her little girl's eyes are similar. Striking photo choice. Looks like it is suggestion another landscape in there. Nice job on form.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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I like how you got end rhymes in every line! Wow. That being said, I had to think for a while to figure out how eyes might 'arch.' I think usually the saying has to do with arching eyebrows. Although when my niece smiles, her eyes look like happy arching half-moons. And her little girl's eyes are similar. Striking photo choice. Looks like it is suggestion another landscape in there. Nice job on form.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thanks for the review and advice. I tried rolling eyes, but seemed gross ha ha. Cheers, have a great week~end.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a lovely poem with a striking image to go with it. It successfully meets the writing prompt criteria and I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck in the contest voting.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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This is a lovely poem with a striking image to go with it. It successfully meets the writing prompt criteria and I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck in the contest voting.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2019
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Thanks for the review Susan, it was a fun write, cheers. Have a great week end.