Circle of Life
Following the path nature intended.2 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
How clever to have caught this slice of life cycle, even if not in real life, but even more skillfully in words. (That does not mean I doubt your fish story. Just complimenting your writing. ; )
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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How clever to have caught this slice of life cycle, even if not in real life, but even more skillfully in words. (That does not mean I doubt your fish story. Just complimenting your writing. ; )
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you, the fish jumps higher and splashes more every time I tell it. Again thanks for your read and your rating. Much appreciated.
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I?m not surprised. Very familiar with fish stories ; ) good luck
Comment from Donald O. Cassidy
I'm an amateur at many types of poetry, but this poem meets the criteria foe Sentyr poetry prompt.
An axiom of literary skills is, "Less is more." Brevity is the point, if words are chosen wisely.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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I'm an amateur at many types of poetry, but this poem meets the criteria foe Sentyr poetry prompt.
An axiom of literary skills is, "Less is more." Brevity is the point, if words are chosen wisely.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2019
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Thank you for the read and review. Try your hand, it is a good feeling when one is able to express an idea in a few words.