Eighty One
She always pleased me.2 total reviews
Comment from Susan Larson
How melancholy. And how well this feeling is enhanced by the faded painting and the washed out lavender background. It's sad that so many "young" people live this way missing their loved one. Very tenderly written.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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How melancholy. And how well this feeling is enhanced by the faded painting and the washed out lavender background. It's sad that so many "young" people live this way missing their loved one. Very tenderly written.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your very kind review and stars.
Comment from Raul1
I think that this poem has a chance of winning. I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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I think that this poem has a chance of winning. I like how you structured this poem. No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest! Excellent work.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2019
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Thanks, Raul, for the nice review and five stars,
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You're welcome.