Unconditional Love
5-7-5 form67 total reviews
Comment from WryWriter
I count 5-7-5 syllable lines as per writing prompt entry requirement. The first two lines compliment each other well, and the last empathic line gives a new meaning. Great job! Beautiful artwork choice for theme.
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I count 5-7-5 syllable lines as per writing prompt entry requirement. The first two lines compliment each other well, and the last empathic line gives a new meaning. Great job! Beautiful artwork choice for theme.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Wry, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...I love the picture as well...thank you...
Comment from flylikeaneagle
PenPal: what an adorable pup. I love the tenderness of Jesus.
I'm sure that God is watching over many loved pets up in Heaven.
Seems like pups find the perfect owners. I have two dogs that
I walk. God bless. flylikeaneagle
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PenPal: what an adorable pup. I love the tenderness of Jesus.
I'm sure that God is watching over many loved pets up in Heaven.
Seems like pups find the perfect owners. I have two dogs that
I walk. God bless. flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Nancy, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...they love us unconditionally...as God does...I love the picture...God Bless you as well...
Comment from kleck140
Your poem is brief and to the point. It says a lot
in a few words. It has a lot of meaning to me
and I am glad I stopped by. Thanks for sharing.
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Your poem is brief and to the point. It says a lot
in a few words. It has a lot of meaning to me
and I am glad I stopped by. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Kleck, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I'm glad it has a meaning for you...and you like it...you are so very welcome...
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You are welcome!
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smiling....
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smiling....
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO POET: I like your work here in that it's brief, clear, and to the point. You have handled your 5-7-5 accurately. And the subject is spiritual. Well done, poet. This posting is a six star winner. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
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HELLO POET: I like your work here in that it's brief, clear, and to the point. You have handled your 5-7-5 accurately. And the subject is spiritual. Well done, poet. This posting is a six star winner. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Ronnie, thank you for a wonderful review...and for all your lovely stars...I love the unconditional love we get from God and dogs...amazing...thank you....and God Bless you too...
Comment from Sugarray77
I am so glad to see your verse is written to honor the Lord for his gift to you. Pets are a wonderful blessing and can add such richness and diversity to our lives. Thanks for a delightful read.
Melissa
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I am so glad to see your verse is written to honor the Lord for his gift to you. Pets are a wonderful blessing and can add such richness and diversity to our lives. Thanks for a delightful read.
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Melissa, thank you for a wonderful review you...I love animals...and dogs have such an unconditional love for us...they are gifts from God...and your sooooo welcome...
Comment from Dawn Munro
There is nothing in God's creation as loyal as a dog if you ask me, and your poem touches me deeply. Canines truly are Man's best friend, and I love how you say it! Best of luck in the contest.
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There is nothing in God's creation as loyal as a dog if you ask me, and your poem touches me deeply. Canines truly are Man's best friend, and I love how you say it! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Dawn, thank you so very much for a wonderful review you...or maybe a cat...loyal...LOL...dogs truly have unconditional love for us...I love them...and the picture...God Bless...
Comment from Liberty Justice
SIX STARS 6******What highly spiritual poem showing love of Jesus for little puppy dog. Such sweet words of compassion and caring. Read Review mine also. lolol liberty justice
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SIX STARS 6******What highly spiritual poem showing love of Jesus for little puppy dog. Such sweet words of compassion and caring. Read Review mine also. lolol liberty justice
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Liberty, thank you so much for a wonderful review...and all your lovely stars...I love dogs...they give us unconditional love...as God does...I am so glad you like it...thank you...
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Read Review mine also.lolol liberty
justice
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on my way...
Comment from Joan E.
This post must be for a blind contest, since I was not alerted to it. I really like dogs, but since I live in a condo up thirty-two steps I am deprived! You captured the perfect description of a loving pet in this 5-7-5 and even included alliteration. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
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This post must be for a blind contest, since I was not alerted to it. I really like dogs, but since I live in a condo up thirty-two steps I am deprived! You captured the perfect description of a loving pet in this 5-7-5 and even included alliteration. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Joan, LOL...no wonder you have all that energy to travel...you get more rest on the road..32 steps up... thank you so much for a wonderful review...I love dogs...and God...both give us unconditional love...sigh...and thank you for your best wishes...
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Thank you for your lighthearted response and good wishes too. More smiles- Joan
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smiling big...
Comment from karenina
There is gentle comfort in your 5-7-5 offering...the image is amazing--of course as the movie promised "All Dogs Go to Heaven!"--Innocence and purity frame your theme and it is so comforting to read!--Karenina
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There is gentle comfort in your 5-7-5 offering...the image is amazing--of course as the movie promised "All Dogs Go to Heaven!"--Innocence and purity frame your theme and it is so comforting to read!--Karenina
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Karenina, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and I'm glad my poem gave you a good feeling....and I believe...all dogs do go to Heaven...and we will see them again...thank you do much....
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Mystery Poet,
We just lost our dog in June. Gracie had cancerous tumors all over hind end/hips. We spent a little over $1000 a year ago to remove them. She did well, but gradually the lumps came back. It was such a shame because she was still stealing the leftover scraps from the cats. She slept through most nights, and did her business normally every morning and evening. But she was 16, and that's old for a cairn terrier. She was almost totally blind as well. When one of the lumps began to ulcerate, we knew the time had come to put her down. It was tremendously difficult. The only thing that got us through it was knowing she would be in Heaven to meet us one day, along with her brother Willie. Some might question it, but I fully believe it won't be just a reunion with family & friends. God is too good for that. In fact, if our dogs weren't there, I would be deeply saddened. God provides every perfect gift, and He wouldn't hold anything from us.
I enjoyed your poem, but I have to be honest, too. Your 3rd line seemed slightly weak to me. However, I wish you much luck in the contest! Terrific artwork you chose!
Cheers
Kimbob
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Hi Mystery Poet,
We just lost our dog in June. Gracie had cancerous tumors all over hind end/hips. We spent a little over $1000 a year ago to remove them. She did well, but gradually the lumps came back. It was such a shame because she was still stealing the leftover scraps from the cats. She slept through most nights, and did her business normally every morning and evening. But she was 16, and that's old for a cairn terrier. She was almost totally blind as well. When one of the lumps began to ulcerate, we knew the time had come to put her down. It was tremendously difficult. The only thing that got us through it was knowing she would be in Heaven to meet us one day, along with her brother Willie. Some might question it, but I fully believe it won't be just a reunion with family & friends. God is too good for that. In fact, if our dogs weren't there, I would be deeply saddened. God provides every perfect gift, and He wouldn't hold anything from us.
I enjoyed your poem, but I have to be honest, too. Your 3rd line seemed slightly weak to me. However, I wish you much luck in the contest! Terrific artwork you chose!
Cheers
Kimbob
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Kimbob, I am so sorry for the loss of Gracie...I lost my Dalmatian (Domino)...he was 14...and I know the pain of losing them...they are big parts of our family....but like you I know I will see him again...we can only do so much for them...but when it is their time...much like us...all have to go...I know Gracie is with God now...jumping from cloud to cloud...and watching you from Heaven...all dogs go to Heaven...thank you for sharing your story my friend...and thank you for a wonderful review...Cheers to you as well...love xxoo
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Dear Mystery Poet,
Just to clarify, I don't believe in clouds and harps. Heaven is going to be the most beautiful place you have ever seen. And no pollution. I'm not interested in living in a mansion. A cozy little log cabin will do nicely, right beside a gurgling brook, at the bottom of a meadow filled to the brim with wildflowers. That's where I want to spend eternity. There will be few jobs for harp players. But we all will have a job to do. The universe is huge. And someone will have to take care of it.
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I like to think...Domino is happy...running with other days in Heaven...sounds like you have your eternal place all picked out...the perfect place to retire Kimbob...amazing...
