Unconditional Love
5-7-5 form67 total reviews
Comment from DonandVicki
I think that your poem explains what the essence of unconditional love is all about. I think that if people were committed to unconditional as much as some pets are, the world would be a kinder place.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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I think that your poem explains what the essence of unconditional love is all about. I think that if people were committed to unconditional as much as some pets are, the world would be a kinder place.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi DonandVicki, Amen...your so very right...Dogs have unconditional love for us...thank you for a wonderful review...
Comment from Sallyo
What a sweet poem! It sweeps away all the puddles, the sharp little fangs, the yapping, and digging, the grizzling... to get to the centre of what dogs offer; companionship and unconditional love.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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What a sweet poem! It sweeps away all the puddles, the sharp little fangs, the yapping, and digging, the grizzling... to get to the centre of what dogs offer; companionship and unconditional love.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Sally, thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and they truly are wonderful companions...and they do love unconditionally...thank you...
Comment from Adri7enne
It follows the 5-7-5 rule very well. I love the picture you chose. The idea of a soft, newly born puppy being God's gift is hard to dispute. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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It follows the 5-7-5 rule very well. I love the picture you chose. The idea of a soft, newly born puppy being God's gift is hard to dispute. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Adri7enne, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it my poem...and thank you for the good luck wishes...
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's sweet. I'm hoping someday when I retire I can have a pup like that. Right now I have two very loving cats. They're fine for the day if I'm not home but I couldn't leave a pup. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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That's sweet. I'm hoping someday when I retire I can have a pup like that. Right now I have two very loving cats. They're fine for the day if I'm not home but I couldn't leave a pup. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Cindy, I know just what you are saying...I can't be home with one now...but I am going to get a puppy soon...thank you for a wonderful review...and your good luck wishes...
Comment from poetwatch
Wow! what a way to show the world a creation of God, Author. :) I hope whoever reads this 5-7-5 understands that all of us are God's creation. and like a pup, innocent in our arms so are we in the arms of our Creator. We were born without sin (pure as snow) unfortunately, growing up, we soil ourselves. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Wow! what a way to show the world a creation of God, Author. :) I hope whoever reads this 5-7-5 understands that all of us are God's creation. and like a pup, innocent in our arms so are we in the arms of our Creator. We were born without sin (pure as snow) unfortunately, growing up, we soil ourselves. This is a good entry for the 5-7-5 contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Poetwatch, WOW!!! thank you so much for a wonderful review....we truly are all creators of God...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for your good luck entry...
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi anon, a lovely three lines written true to form with good enjambment throughout. Lovely accompanying picture and the whole makes a good entry to the contest. Good Luck. Dorothy
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi anon, a lovely three lines written true to form with good enjambment throughout. Lovely accompanying picture and the whole makes a good entry to the contest. Good Luck. Dorothy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Dorothy, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it....I love the picture myself...and thank you for the good luck...
Comment from Hitcher
Yea they look SOoooo cute, and one would think butter wouldn't melt in their mouths BUT once they chew their way through your favorite slippers, destroy a few of your wife's feather-down cushions and poop and pea on your carpets and rugs... pure as the white driven snow starts to fade a bit, ha ha. Sorry I couldn't resist : )) excellent offering friend, good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Yea they look SOoooo cute, and one would think butter wouldn't melt in their mouths BUT once they chew their way through your favorite slippers, destroy a few of your wife's feather-down cushions and poop and pea on your carpets and rugs... pure as the white driven snow starts to fade a bit, ha ha. Sorry I couldn't resist : )) excellent offering friend, good luck!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Hitcher, LOL...but they do love us unconditionally...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for your good luck wishes...
Comment from Mia Twysted
DOG spelled backward is GOD. I have several dogs and I cannot believe how they make me smile sometimes.
They were indeed a gift created by someone who wanted us to experience love.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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DOG spelled backward is GOD. I have several dogs and I cannot believe how they make me smile sometimes.
They were indeed a gift created by someone who wanted us to experience love.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Mia, I had 13 all at once at one time...ten pups...and 3 adults...I love dogs...they love us unconditionally...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...
Comment from Susan Larson
How absolutely precious! And I'm not even a "dog person." However, even cats can bring comfort, or at least some of mine have, and I love seeing the "good shepherd" finding comfort with this pup. I would love to see this picture posted in animal shelters if it is not too politically incorrect!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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How absolutely precious! And I'm not even a "dog person." However, even cats can bring comfort, or at least some of mine have, and I love seeing the "good shepherd" finding comfort with this pup. I would love to see this picture posted in animal shelters if it is not too politically incorrect!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Susan, I love the picture as well...make me smile...God is truly amazing...I love dogs...but I love cats as well...but my allergies say no...sigh...thank you for a wonderful review...I'm so glad you like it...
Comment from Mark Valentine
The two images that most immediately come to mind when I think of unconditional love are God and dogs. Your 5-7-5 and accompanying illustration do a great job of capturing that.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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The two images that most immediately come to mind when I think of unconditional love are God and dogs. Your 5-7-5 and accompanying illustration do a great job of capturing that.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Hi Mark, exactly...thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...
