Natural Harmony
Finding serenity at day's end...15 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nicely composed. The image and Naani are tranquil. Sort of falls into the category of "all's well that end's well." If, at the end of the day, we can flop into a sound sleep we are fortunate. Marilyn
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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This is very nicely composed. The image and Naani are tranquil. Sort of falls into the category of "all's well that end's well." If, at the end of the day, we can flop into a sound sleep we are fortunate. Marilyn
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thanx, Marilyn, for stopping in on this one, ma'am -- much appreciated! ;) Yvette
Comment from Ronni
Oh indeed Yvette,
a perfect reposing gratitude and reflective nudge into peaceful calm
and sleep captured so enigmatically and incomparably in this
unique Naani poem dear, and perfect pic equally calming and
divinely inspirational. Even a bit of spiritual meditation.
Thanks for sharing dear, brief, but brilliantly uplifting, as is
your style and commemoration of such subtle and simple touches.
Best always, Ronni
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Oh indeed Yvette,
a perfect reposing gratitude and reflective nudge into peaceful calm
and sleep captured so enigmatically and incomparably in this
unique Naani poem dear, and perfect pic equally calming and
divinely inspirational. Even a bit of spiritual meditation.
Thanks for sharing dear, brief, but brilliantly uplifting, as is
your style and commemoration of such subtle and simple touches.
Best always, Ronni
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Yeah, some of these contests are for 'shorties' as I call them.... guess that as long as they call for shortie lingerie then I can handle them -- LOL!! ;) :) Lately, the shorties work well as, like I said before, I'm trying to find my 'mojo' again and a poem here and there is what I seem to be able to do. :) :) Thank you, my lady, for your time that you have taken with this and with others... they mean more than these silly words I'm clicking out can ever say! ;) :) Take care of you out there and keep on smiling .... :) :) Yvette
Comment from Mark D. R.
Your selected illustration is a perfect companion to your Naani entry for today.
I am a big fan of centered text lines and no caps for these short verses.
I am soothed by how you created your words.
Good luck in the contest voting.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Your selected illustration is a perfect companion to your Naani entry for today.
I am a big fan of centered text lines and no caps for these short verses.
I am soothed by how you created your words.
Good luck in the contest voting.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for this great review.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Naani about the natural harmony we can find in nature anytime if the day. There is always something that enlightens our mind and gives us peace for our souls.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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A very well-written Naani about the natural harmony we can find in nature anytime if the day. There is always something that enlightens our mind and gives us peace for our souls.
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thanks much for this great review.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. Your poem certainly meets the standards of the naani. It's a good narrative about the creeping of twilight. You expressed the change in subtle wording. Good luck in the contest. Robert
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Hello mystery writer. Your poem certainly meets the standards of the naani. It's a good narrative about the creeping of twilight. You expressed the change in subtle wording. Good luck in the contest. Robert
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thanks so much for this review!
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you're welcome.
Comment from Janetsue
This is a gorgeous posting with its message and artwork combining to touch a reader on deep levels. I like everything about it...especially the conclusion bringing to mind a night of restful peace. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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This is a gorgeous posting with its message and artwork combining to touch a reader on deep levels. I like everything about it...especially the conclusion bringing to mind a night of restful peace. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much!!
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You're very welcome!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is an excellent naani, my friend. I like the 'day's harsh emotions'. Isn't it so very true. I wish you the best in the contest~Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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This is an excellent naani, my friend. I like the 'day's harsh emotions'. Isn't it so very true. I wish you the best in the contest~Debbie
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful review, Debbie!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love that time of day as the sun almost disappears and night descends, there is a kind of serene anticipation of peace as the world sleeps, your poem is a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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I love that time of day as the sun almost disappears and night descends, there is a kind of serene anticipation of peace as the world sleeps, your poem is a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Thank you, Dolly!
Comment from MissMerri
I love this Naani. It says much, and says it with charm and class. I especially loved the way you used the creep of twilight's shadows to symbolize the blending of the day's harshness into the still and peaceful night. Just lovely and deeply meaningful. Good luck in the contest. I think you very well may have written the winner. ~MM
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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I love this Naani. It says much, and says it with charm and class. I especially loved the way you used the creep of twilight's shadows to symbolize the blending of the day's harshness into the still and peaceful night. Just lovely and deeply meaningful. Good luck in the contest. I think you very well may have written the winner. ~MM
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2019
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Oh my goodness, MM - what a lovely surprise!! Your review is such a bright spot this Friday morning... thank you, THANK YOU!! And I'm so very glad that my words touched you as it was certainly written from the heart (yeah, no posing this time or putting myself in other shoes!) as I sat out on the front porch and watched darkness take the hill in front of our house.... Again, your review is so very appreciated!! Have a wonderful weekend!
Comment from Susan Larson
I love the way your picture illustrates your words. Shadows getting longer, stretching out into the night, blending into the feeling of peace. Like nature's version of yoga. Love it! Namaste.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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I love the way your picture illustrates your words. Shadows getting longer, stretching out into the night, blending into the feeling of peace. Like nature's version of yoga. Love it! Namaste.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2019
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Yes! Thank you, Susan!!
