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Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
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Being a mother is not just about protecting and feeding one's child.

It's also about teaching a child to live in this world .. It's not an easy task .

Children minds' are like sponges .. They see and imitate their parents , so it's crucial to show him the correct way to act if we want our children to grow up responsible beings capable of giving a positive contribution to our society.

Those years growing up at home with our parents are extremely important.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019

Comment from Janice Canerdy
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You have used your syllables excellently in this amusing poetic comment on Mom's idea of nutrition and the kid's idea. Of course, she's right, but that doesn't make a child crave broccoli.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019

Comment from Alex Rosel
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Ha, ha! I love this. You've captured a child's perspective extremely well with the concluding line "Veggies for lunch...NO." I can remember hating vegetables when I was a nipper {winks}. And I love the author notes you've added {smiles}.

Thank you for giving me a smile.

 Comment Written 28-Sep-2019