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Comment from
tempeste
Being a mother is not just about protecting and feeding one's child.
It's also about teaching a child to live in this world .. It's not an easy task .
Children minds' are like sponges .. They see and imitate their parents , so it's crucial to show him the correct way to act if we want our children to grow up responsible beings capable of giving a positive contribution to our society.
Those years growing up at home with our parents are extremely important.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
Comment from
Janice Canerdy
You have used your syllables excellently in this amusing poetic comment on Mom's idea of nutrition and the kid's idea. Of course, she's right, but that doesn't make a child crave broccoli.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
Comment from
Alex Rosel
Ha, ha! I love this. You've captured a child's perspective extremely well with the concluding line "Veggies for lunch...NO." I can remember hating vegetables when I was a nipper {winks}. And I love the author notes you've added {smiles}.
Thank you for giving me a smile.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2019
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