Autumn
My favorite season10 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is excellent, from the visuals to the verbal.
The parts I like the best are the calling of the colours, such as
"When the leaves of red, orange, and gold,
first, begin to Fall."
I like poetry that reminds me of my own experiences, and this makes me think of when I was in a long stay in hospital one fall. I have wonderful memories of picking up these leaves from around a beech tree we had in "our garden" to bring joyful colour into my room. (The staff were very kind, and let me do this).
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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This is excellent, from the visuals to the verbal.
The parts I like the best are the calling of the colours, such as
"When the leaves of red, orange, and gold,
first, begin to Fall."
I like poetry that reminds me of my own experiences, and this makes me think of when I was in a long stay in hospital one fall. I have wonderful memories of picking up these leaves from around a beech tree we had in "our garden" to bring joyful colour into my room. (The staff were very kind, and let me do this).
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your kind words and for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from Janetsue
This is an energetic and gorgeous posting about the wonderful fall season. The crisp air (which, I hope, is going to start where I live very soon since it's been in the nineties and no rain for 35 days--but I digress) ...the crisp air is refreshing and brings to mind how busy so many critters are preparing for the winter...especially the squirrels skittering around burying pecans and acorns.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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This is an energetic and gorgeous posting about the wonderful fall season. The crisp air (which, I hope, is going to start where I live very soon since it's been in the nineties and no rain for 35 days--but I digress) ...the crisp air is refreshing and brings to mind how busy so many critters are preparing for the winter...especially the squirrels skittering around burying pecans and acorns.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Crazy weather for fall! Thank you so much for reading and for this great review. :)
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You're truly welcome!!
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You're truly welcome!!
Comment from NickieT
This poem is a beautiful combination of spirituality and nature. You open with a gorgeous picture that sets the stage for all of your visuals and end with a strongly rhythmic dedication to fall.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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This poem is a beautiful combination of spirituality and nature. You open with a gorgeous picture that sets the stage for all of your visuals and end with a strongly rhythmic dedication to fall.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your kind words and this lovely review. :)
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it. You seem to have captured the essence of each of the four seasons. Good luck.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I enjoyed reading it. You seem to have captured the essence of each of the four seasons. Good luck.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review.
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This poem often achieves a lyrical quality. I hear some subtle repetition going on. This poet is someone who I could definitely agree with on a regular basis, as I also feel that autumn is the most interesting and colorful season when it comes to writing poetry. Perhaps it is the time that when 'the air turns crisp and cold,' that the mind suddenly turns back to writing in earnest. Usually I suggest adding commas, but this time I am going to suggest removing two commas: one after gold in the second to last line, and also removing the comma after the word 'first' in the very last line. Well-organized contest entry!
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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This poem often achieves a lyrical quality. I hear some subtle repetition going on. This poet is someone who I could definitely agree with on a regular basis, as I also feel that autumn is the most interesting and colorful season when it comes to writing poetry. Perhaps it is the time that when 'the air turns crisp and cold,' that the mind suddenly turns back to writing in earnest. Usually I suggest adding commas, but this time I am going to suggest removing two commas: one after gold in the second to last line, and also removing the comma after the word 'first' in the very last line. Well-organized contest entry!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you for this very nice review, it means a lot. :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
God gifts plenty and dimensionally in all four seasons, but you like Autumn the most, you enjoy when the leaves of red, orange, and gold, first, begin to Fall; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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God gifts plenty and dimensionally in all four seasons, but you like Autumn the most, you enjoy when the leaves of red, orange, and gold, first, begin to Fall; well said, well done.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thank you for this nice review. :)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-I like your poem, and
the imagery is vivid
and paints a good word
picture of what you enjoy
about autumn.
-I like how you lead into it
with the other seasons, and
the beauty they offer, but you
show many ways to celebrate Fall.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-I like your poem, and
the imagery is vivid
and paints a good word
picture of what you enjoy
about autumn.
-I like how you lead into it
with the other seasons, and
the beauty they offer, but you
show many ways to celebrate Fall.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thank you for your kind words...i really appreciate you reading my poem. :)
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You are very welcome.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
An enjoyable poem highlighting some of the positive features each season can offer. A quasi free verse rhyming poem with off beat rhythm. The picture chosen is a beautiful addition to add to the meaning of this contest entry. Well done and good luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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An enjoyable poem highlighting some of the positive features each season can offer. A quasi free verse rhyming poem with off beat rhythm. The picture chosen is a beautiful addition to add to the meaning of this contest entry. Well done and good luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 30-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thank you so much for taking time to read and review my poem. :)
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on a beautiful piece. Autumn is my favourite season too; the weather is just perfect; not too hot and not too cold! Summer is so hot and humid where I live in Queensland; so it's my least favourite. Good luck with the competition!
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Congratulations on a beautiful piece. Autumn is my favourite season too; the weather is just perfect; not too hot and not too cold! Summer is so hot and humid where I live in Queensland; so it's my least favourite. Good luck with the competition!
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thank you for this lovely review, and the six stars. It really means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A colourful write with a spasmodic meter, nonetheless it is joyful and bright and autumnal colour has a golden appearance, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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A colourful write with a spasmodic meter, nonetheless it is joyful and bright and autumnal colour has a golden appearance, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2019
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Thank you for this very lovely review. :)
