A Happy Halloween
With A Few Scares Thrown In16 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
This is an excellent read for a children's poem, including the thoughts of being scared with all the fun they will have, very well written for this prompt, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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This is an excellent read for a children's poem, including the thoughts of being scared with all the fun they will have, very well written for this prompt, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for this great review..have a Happy Halloween🎃
Comment from zanya
A-h-h what a treat for kids to read or to have read to them for Halloween- love stanza four 'Where tattered curtains flutter ' so atmospheric and a great visual to illustrate
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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A-h-h what a treat for kids to read or to have read to them for Halloween- love stanza four 'Where tattered curtains flutter ' so atmospheric and a great visual to illustrate
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thats my favorite part too. Thank you for this nice review..Happy Halloween🎃
Comment from beizanten
Great picture. a rather chilling and well written opening stanza. Interesting second stanza. A lighthearted third stanza. The rest of the poem is very good. Keep up the good work,
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Great picture. a rather chilling and well written opening stanza. Interesting second stanza. A lighthearted third stanza. The rest of the poem is very good. Keep up the good work,
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for this very nice review..have fun on Halloween🎃.
Comment from Ogden
A top-notch Halloween poem with excellent rhyming, and telling a good story, a package that, in my opinion, has an excellent chance to be the contest winner (although there's some tough competition out there).
Good luck in the voting!
Don
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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A top-notch Halloween poem with excellent rhyming, and telling a good story, a package that, in my opinion, has an excellent chance to be the contest winner (although there's some tough competition out there).
Good luck in the voting!
Don
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your kind words and this great review.. Happy Halloween..🎃
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You're very welcome.
Don
Comment from Bill Pinder
Thanks for sharing this writing about spooks and what may bump in the night. Enjoy the season and keep writing until the light ends and then what???
Bill
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thanks for sharing this writing about spooks and what may bump in the night. Enjoy the season and keep writing until the light ends and then what???
Bill
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Hahaha...then write about the darkness! Thank you so much for this nice review...Happy Halloween.🎃
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer!
What a delightful Halloween offering! It is rhythmical and fun! Not frightening as some of the offerings for this contest surely are! Children would so enjoy hearing this offering recited aloud.
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Hello Mystery Writer!
What a delightful Halloween offering! It is rhythmical and fun! Not frightening as some of the offerings for this contest surely are! Children would so enjoy hearing this offering recited aloud.
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review...Happy Halloween.🎃
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! Always loved to read those kind of stories to the boys when they were young so that, as the reader/parent, you could really animate the ending!! ;) :) A great offering for the contest - best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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LOL! Always loved to read those kind of stories to the boys when they were young so that, as the reader/parent, you could really animate the ending!! ;) :) A great offering for the contest - best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much. A lot of childhood memories fueled this write. Happy Halloween..🎃
Comment from AprilViolet
This is a perfect Halloween poem for children and adults alike! You definitely have a knack for writing childrens poems! Good luck in the contest! Six stars!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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This is a perfect Halloween poem for children and adults alike! You definitely have a knack for writing childrens poems! Good luck in the contest! Six stars!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for this lovely comment..it made my day.
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. It was really fun to read and very contest appropriate. I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. It was really fun to read and very contest appropriate. I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review...and happy Halloween to you! :)
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Delightful details keep this Halloween poem's pace continually moving forward with interest. For example, the stanza: Except for the very last house,
that sits upon a hill.
Where tattered curtains flutter,
as they dust each windowsill.
I love this line: A scary, hairy monster,
just might wander down the street.
And also the ending is stellar:
I'm sure there's nothing lurking
round the corner...
OR...IS THERE?
Darling, movement-oriented graphic choice, too!
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Delightful details keep this Halloween poem's pace continually moving forward with interest. For example, the stanza: Except for the very last house,
that sits upon a hill.
Where tattered curtains flutter,
as they dust each windowsill.
I love this line: A scary, hairy monster,
just might wander down the street.
And also the ending is stellar:
I'm sure there's nothing lurking
round the corner...
OR...IS THERE?
Darling, movement-oriented graphic choice, too!
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you for this kind review...it made my day!
