Dance of Love
1-6-1 Entry12 total reviews
Comment from NickieT
I love how well you have created an expression using just 5 words. This is short and beautiful and hopeful. I do think that the text is a bit bright for the chosen picture so I would either darken it or make the background slightly more gray. Otherwise I think this is an excellent presentation
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I love how well you have created an expression using just 5 words. This is short and beautiful and hopeful. I do think that the text is a bit bright for the chosen picture so I would either darken it or make the background slightly more gray. Otherwise I think this is an excellent presentation
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
Comment from Bill Schott
This 1-6-1, Dance of Love, has the proper set up and finds that the dance floor can be the site of renewed interest in a passionate relationship.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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This 1-6-1, Dance of Love, has the proper set up and finds that the dance floor can be the site of renewed interest in a passionate relationship.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019
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Thank you for reading and sharing your insights!
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
A perfect 1-6-1 contest entry with a beautiful suggestion as to how to 'recapture romance.' I do wish I could dance (LOL).
Your chosen artwork draws in the eye. I like the red font (passion's color). Your rhyming words are clearly linked together and are not forced.
Very best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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A perfect 1-6-1 contest entry with a beautiful suggestion as to how to 'recapture romance.' I do wish I could dance (LOL).
Your chosen artwork draws in the eye. I like the red font (passion's color). Your rhyming words are clearly linked together and are not forced.
Very best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your insights!
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You're so welcome :)
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. I think you did a very nice job with the 1-6-1. I believe all poetry should tell a story and you completed the story in your verse. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Hello mystery writer. I think you did a very nice job with the 1-6-1. I believe all poetry should tell a story and you completed the story in your verse. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your insights!
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you're welcome
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three solid rhymes that reads smoothly
has meaning as well.
Wonderful art work to match
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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You've written an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with three solid rhymes that reads smoothly
has meaning as well.
Wonderful art work to match
Best wishes in the contest
Robert
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thank you for taking the time to read and share your insights!
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet.
I enjoyed your entry and gave you your 3rd vote.
Dancing is certainly a very romantic activity...
.....it's a great moment during which two people are close together touching , communicating with their body their feelings.
In a troubled relationship a dance can be the spark to bring back memories, moments when they we deeply in love ...like on their wedding day.
Dancing is an activity during which two people spend quality time together ...
....it involves and stirs emotions we have for the other person, it strengthens the emotional, romantic bond between couples.
I love the artwork you chose too.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Ciao poet.
I enjoyed your entry and gave you your 3rd vote.
Dancing is certainly a very romantic activity...
.....it's a great moment during which two people are close together touching , communicating with their body their feelings.
In a troubled relationship a dance can be the spark to bring back memories, moments when they we deeply in love ...like on their wedding day.
Dancing is an activity during which two people spend quality time together ...
....it involves and stirs emotions we have for the other person, it strengthens the emotional, romantic bond between couples.
I love the artwork you chose too.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your insightful review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked this presentation because dancing can indeed capture romance and some dances are positively erotic, like the tango for instance, you captures the essence of romance and the dance here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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I liked this presentation because dancing can indeed capture romance and some dances are positively erotic, like the tango for instance, you captures the essence of romance and the dance here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much for your encouraging feedback!
Comment from Cybertron1986
I like how you incorporated dance and romance here to rekindle that possibility of sparking what was lost. The words were well chosen, and thoughtfully placed to provide that elegant sound of probability. Beautiful
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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I like how you incorporated dance and romance here to rekindle that possibility of sparking what was lost. The words were well chosen, and thoughtfully placed to provide that elegant sound of probability. Beautiful
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thank you for sharing your insightful comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Susan Larson
While this poem describes a very romantic notion, and the picture you chose certainly conveys this feeling, I'm not sure your words would hold up without a picture. Please bear in mind I am new to some of these poetry forms.
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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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While this poem describes a very romantic notion, and the picture you chose certainly conveys this feeling, I'm not sure your words would hold up without a picture. Please bear in mind I am new to some of these poetry forms.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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A true poet can envision a dance sparking a romance - look with your heart, not your eyes. And try these challenges yourself to get the feel of various forms of poetry. Learning experience.
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Yes, still learning.
Comment from DonandVicki
Using just five words and eight syllables you have managed to tell a whole volume. The minds eye can concoct a whole romantic novel from your one=six=one.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Using just five words and eight syllables you have managed to tell a whole volume. The minds eye can concoct a whole romantic novel from your one=six=one.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for your insightful review. One reader said if I didn't include the artwork, the poem would have made no sense. Looking with the heart, not the eyes - that's a true poet.
