Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

What a gorgeous poem about birth. Babies are so innocent and love to be held, cooed, and hugged. It beats all odds when you show a picture of a baby. So precious.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Thanks Rosemary

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1, The Greatest Gift, has the proper set up and verifies what we all already know. New life is what it's all about.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Thanks Bill

Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

This is beautiful. Birth is precious; the gift of life a blessing.
Your rhyme is perfection, and I like that the rhyming words are capitalized.
Very best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2019

Many thanks

reply by C. Gale Burnett on 04-Oct-2019

You're so welcome :)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Correctly depicted the very first thankful moment at the birth of a baby, worth more than all things on earth; well said, well done; wish good wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019

Many thanks

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a Rhythm %hat 1-6-1 Contest Entry rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar issues as well.
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Adjective Content and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2019

Many thanks