haiku (when dreams fade)
A sunset contest entry11 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
Dreams do come true... You must be desperate for a Disney Vacation. I am glad you won the contest. Good artwork choice. Nice spiritual poem. Great work :)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Dreams do come true... You must be desperate for a Disney Vacation. I am glad you won the contest. Good artwork choice. Nice spiritual poem. Great work :)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much for sharing my sunset haiku and your kind praise. No, I think my Disney vacations are over. Rod
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Rod. This is a very nice "sunset" haiku. Congratulations on winning the contest. The image and wording work well together. I like the positive message. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Hi Rod. This is a very nice "sunset" haiku. Congratulations on winning the contest. The image and wording work well together. I like the positive message. Marilyn
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much, Marilyn, for sharing my sunset haiku. I was so fortunate to find a picture that caused the poem to write itself. Rod
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Amazing when that happens, isn't it?
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Amazing when that happens, isn't it?
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. The poem certainly meets all the requirements for a true haiku poem. I like the message because it says that even in our failure God reminds us that there's always tomorrow. Good luck in the contest. Robert
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Hello mystery writer. The poem certainly meets all the requirements for a true haiku poem. I like the message because it says that even in our failure God reminds us that there's always tomorrow. Good luck in the contest. Robert
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2019
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Thank you, Robert, for sharing my haiku and understanding my message so well.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely poem that gives credit where credit is due. The creator of that sunset will also get you through hard times, if you only ask.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely poem that gives credit where credit is due. The creator of that sunset will also get you through hard times, if you only ask.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much, Janice, for your kind praise of my sunset haiku.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
After the sunset and when the dreams fade, there is sunrise, and God's golden presence of sunrise reminds us, there is always tomorrow; well said, well done.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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After the sunset and when the dreams fade, there is sunrise, and God's golden presence of sunrise reminds us, there is always tomorrow; well said, well done.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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You have stated the premise of my haiku beautifully. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent entry in this sunset haiku contest, oh yes indeed God is there each morning to remind us in "glowing" terms that His tender mercies are there to avail ourselves of. Beautifully written my friend, good luck in the contest, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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This is an excellent entry in this sunset haiku contest, oh yes indeed God is there each morning to remind us in "glowing" terms that His tender mercies are there to avail ourselves of. Beautifully written my friend, good luck in the contest, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Many thanks, Roy, for sharing my sunset haiku and your kind praise.
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Well done
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The topic is good, and
the imagery is effective
with "golden presence".
-A good message in the
poem, as well, in the
closing line.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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-Very nice image
and presentation.
-The syllable count is good.
-The topic is good, and
the imagery is effective
with "golden presence".
-A good message in the
poem, as well, in the
closing line.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much, Pam, for your kind praise of my haiku.
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from Tessa Kay
That's a wonderful way to look at a sunset, as God's reminder that there is always a tomorrow which may bring all the necessary changes to fix today's problems. Very well put.
All the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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That's a wonderful way to look at a sunset, as God's reminder that there is always a tomorrow which may bring all the necessary changes to fix today's problems. Very well put.
All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my sunset haiku, Tessa. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from NickieT
Wow, what a beautiful declaration to the glory of God. I like how you have satisfied the prompt in a unique way. You could not have chosen a better picture to represent the hope of a new dawn. =)
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Wow, what a beautiful declaration to the glory of God. I like how you have satisfied the prompt in a unique way. You could not have chosen a better picture to represent the hope of a new dawn. =)
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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I am thrilled by your enthusiastic response to my haiku, Nickie. Many thanks for your kind praise.
Comment from Bill Pinder
Excellent writing in this haiku about the sunset. You chose the perfect picture to pair with your poem. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this way.
Bill
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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Excellent writing in this haiku about the sunset. You chose the perfect picture to pair with your poem. Thanks for sharing your creativity in this way.
Bill
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Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you for your kind praise of my sunset haiku, Bill. I got lucky finding that fabulous picture.
