haiku (when dreams fade)
A sunset contest entry11 total reviews
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements for the most part. The flaws are:
You begin with a capital letter and those are not allowed.
You speak to human nature rather than the natural event of the sunset itself which is the basic intent of haiku.
Good luck in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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This meets the contest requirements for the most part. The flaws are:
You begin with a capital letter and those are not allowed.
You speak to human nature rather than the natural event of the sunset itself which is the basic intent of haiku.
Good luck in the voting and thank you for sharing it.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2019
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Thank you for sharing my sunset haiku and your tip about capital letters. There are so many so-called ?rules? regarding HAIKU that it?s impossible to know which to adhere to.
