On Air Force One
50 Word Flash Fiction contest entry17 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
This is so funny. It kept you in suspense until you got to the twist, as I call it.
As you read it, you think about how we are saluting the servicemen. Congratulations on your win.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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This is so funny. It kept you in suspense until you got to the twist, as I call it.
As you read it, you think about how we are saluting the servicemen. Congratulations on your win.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2019
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big sixer, Art. I dearly appreciate the gracious rating and congrats. I'm glad you liked my little story. Have a wonderful day and thank you again.
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Ron
Comment from Susan Larson
This is very amusing with a real surprise, quirky ending and sort of a story within a story. I like the dialogue. IT is no surprise that this flash fiction entry was a winner. Sure won me over!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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This is very amusing with a real surprise, quirky ending and sort of a story within a story. I like the dialogue. IT is no surprise that this flash fiction entry was a winner. Sure won me over!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Susan. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I was just in one of those moods. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Thank you again. Have a wonderful weekend.
Ron
Comment from rjuselius
haha. this is an entertaining piece of prose dear anonymous! tying the president to fanstory is quite a leap but you make it work.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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haha. this is an entertaining piece of prose dear anonymous! tying the president to fanstory is quite a leap but you make it work.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Rebekka. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is clever. I can see why you entry is doing well in the contest. It's unique and funny. So, it stands out from the rest.
Nice job. Your narrator has his priorities right.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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This is clever. I can see why you entry is doing well in the contest. It's unique and funny. So, it stands out from the rest.
Nice job. Your narrator has his priorities right.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review, Debbie. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece. I was just in one of those moods. Lol.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of the few words you were allowed to create a excellent piece complete with war, heroism--and, of course, a FanStory contest! LOL! Good job
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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You have made excellent use of all of the few words you were allowed to create a excellent piece complete with war, heroism--and, of course, a FanStory contest! LOL! Good job
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review and generous stars, Janice. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Mia Twysted
There are so many people with a good sense of humor who are doing this contest. The judging is going to be hard. I love the way it was important to get the laptop after the rescue. I can see a soldier sitting there still in gear typing away.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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There are so many people with a good sense of humor who are doing this contest. The judging is going to be hard. I love the way it was important to get the laptop after the rescue. I can see a soldier sitting there still in gear typing away.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Mia. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, lets get our priorities right here! Fanstory is at the top of the list and these contests wait for no man! I loved your clever contest entry, good luck, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Ha ha ha, lets get our priorities right here! Fanstory is at the top of the list and these contests wait for no man! I loved your clever contest entry, good luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review and gracious stars, Dolly. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
Comment from juliaSjames
Haha. And indeed you have recounted the story with military precision and skill. I enjoyed the twist in your short write. Especially since you kept it close to home. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Haha. And indeed you have recounted the story with military precision and skill. I enjoyed the twist in your short write. Especially since you kept it close to home. Best of luck.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Julia. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness. Have a great day.
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Kudos on your win. It was a great spoof write. I'm still chuckling.
JJ
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL! What a fun Dribble offering for this contest -- PERFECT! I've just got this life-size pic of something like this happening as I know some special forces guys and they all have their 'hangups'...lol! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls this evening! ;)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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LOL! What a fun Dribble offering for this contest -- PERFECT! I've just got this life-size pic of something like this happening as I know some special forces guys and they all have their 'hangups'...lol! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls this evening! ;)
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Yvette. I don't know why I like writing these dumb things but I have fun when I do. Lol. I really appreciate the gracious stars, Y. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great night.
Comment from Alex Rosel
Ha, ha! This gave me a chuckle.
But I'm somewhat confused... Why didn't the Fifty word flash fiction story contest come first before rescuing the President {winks}.
Best of luck with this when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Ha, ha! This gave me a chuckle.
But I'm somewhat confused... Why didn't the Fifty word flash fiction story contest come first before rescuing the President {winks}.
Best of luck with this when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2019
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Lol. Yeah, I guess recuing the President would hold slightly more importance. Haha. Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Alex. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
