The Halloween Costume Party
5-7-5 Halloween contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from moongirlwriter
The first time I read this. . .I must admit, I didn't get it but with all those votes, I figured I must have missed something (sometimes I'm a little slow with jokes). Okay. . .this is pretty funny. :) Congrats to you in winning the contest. :)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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The first time I read this. . .I must admit, I didn't get it but with all those votes, I figured I must have missed something (sometimes I'm a little slow with jokes). Okay. . .this is pretty funny. :) Congrats to you in winning the contest. :)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review and congrats, moon. Yeah, I put author notes in there just in case. I knew some people wouldn't know what I was talking about. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from Debbie Pope
You get six stars for originality, but I am fresh out. It's Friday you know. Anyway, I have never heard of a pre-apple costume. Sounds clever to me. If I put it in to my handy Thesaurus, it probably would reveal Birthday Suit for a synonym.
Good luck in the contest. This should do well.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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You get six stars for originality, but I am fresh out. It's Friday you know. Anyway, I have never heard of a pre-apple costume. Sounds clever to me. If I put it in to my handy Thesaurus, it probably would reveal Birthday Suit for a synonym.
Good luck in the contest. This should do well.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Debbie. I really appreciate the big six offer and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great day.
Comment from LisaMay
... with your Adam's apple on display I suppose. What a good idea - that would save on the cost of a fancy dress costume. An inventive poem to follow up on your inventive outfit.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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... with your Adam's apple on display I suppose. What a good idea - that would save on the cost of a fancy dress costume. An inventive poem to follow up on your inventive outfit.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Lisa. Lol. Yeah, it's a fairly cheap costume in cost. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a wonderful night.
Comment from Alex Rosel
Ha, ha! This is an effective use of a 5-7-5 poem to deliver a joke, and the punchline is neatly self-contained in the final line. That's structured well{smiles}.
Best of luck with this when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Ha, ha! This is an effective use of a 5-7-5 poem to deliver a joke, and the punchline is neatly self-contained in the final line. That's structured well{smiles}.
Best of luck with this when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Alex. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
