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Comment from tempeste
In the past it was the man that made the first move .....now in modern times girls / women are more outspoken and choose to voice their feelings before their male partners , like the pretty girl in your poem did.
We live in a world of great social turmoil .. ( role changing , gender and gay issues , sexual orientations .. It 's hard to keep up )
I find these changes hard to accept at times.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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In the past it was the man that made the first move .....now in modern times girls / women are more outspoken and choose to voice their feelings before their male partners , like the pretty girl in your poem did.
We live in a world of great social turmoil .. ( role changing , gender and gay issues , sexual orientations .. It 's hard to keep up )
I find these changes hard to accept at times.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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HELLO TEMPESTE: I thank you for reminding me of how a gentleman addressed a lady when he met her. Dad and my older brother told me to always treat a girl with the utmost of respect, Treat her like a lady. So...That's what I do. God bless you, Tempeste. Ciao dear lady. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from NickieT
This is an interesting poem. I find the notion of having someone rub their beard on my cheek to be less romantic and more odd - as it can be scratchy. But I appreciate the way that you have worded it and find it to be a pleasant read, even though beard rubbings are not for me.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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This is an interesting poem. I find the notion of having someone rub their beard on my cheek to be less romantic and more odd - as it can be scratchy. But I appreciate the way that you have worded it and find it to be a pleasant read, even though beard rubbings are not for me.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2019
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HELLO NICKIE: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem.You are appreciated. Ha ha ha...My dear lady...the beard rubbing is just a figure of speech. As in: A joke is very funny. It, "Cracked you up." Or...that Halloween costume scared me. I ran away like a, "Bat out of hell." It's only a matter of expression. I don't believe that, "actual." beard rubbing appeals to any girl. Again...thank you, Nickie. God bless you, my friend. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from moongirlwriter
An interesting poem. . . and I'm not sure if you have a typo with the double Mr. Mr.. . .it's kind of hard for me to tell. Maybe additional punctuation?
Young women do get that feeling when they are young, but have become adults. What is that song, "The Merry Month of May?" from Camelot. I do appreciate the artwork, I think you've caputured the essence of the poem with this portrait. :)
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An interesting poem. . . and I'm not sure if you have a typo with the double Mr. Mr.. . .it's kind of hard for me to tell. Maybe additional punctuation?
Young women do get that feeling when they are young, but have become adults. What is that song, "The Merry Month of May?" from Camelot. I do appreciate the artwork, I think you've caputured the essence of the poem with this portrait. :)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2019
