A Fumbling Fool
Something to look forward to?17 total reviews
Comment from Wils
Sounds like something I have to look forward to, or maybe I'm already there and don't realise it. A very entertaining piece that gave me a smile. Nice one.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Sounds like something I have to look forward to, or maybe I'm already there and don't realise it. A very entertaining piece that gave me a smile. Nice one.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Haha... and your friends are too blind or deaf to notice and can't tell you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tyburn about the fumbling fool who stumbles about while mumbling and grumbling about about this unfair life that makes us drool.
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A very well-written Tyburn about the fumbling fool who stumbles about while mumbling and grumbling about about this unfair life that makes us drool.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks for reviewing. This fate may well be ahead for all of us.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This form of poetry just lends itself to outrageous, but totally acceptable, silliness. you have used it very skillfully to that end and I salute you.
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This form of poetry just lends itself to outrageous, but totally acceptable, silliness. you have used it very skillfully to that end and I salute you.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your wonderful review!
Comment from Alex Rosel
Ha, ha! A great Tyburn poem that meets all the requirements of the form. I particularly like your use of drool here; it's indicative of a mumbling, grumbling person (although I'm not sure it applies to someone who stumbles with their words).
Best of luck with this when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Ha, ha! A great Tyburn poem that meets all the requirements of the form. I particularly like your use of drool here; it's indicative of a mumbling, grumbling person (although I'm not sure it applies to someone who stumbles with their words).
Best of luck with this when the voting booth opens {smiles}.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your good wishes. I'm glad you got a chuckle out of my fool.
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent tyburn poem, and a darn good entry in this contest my friend, The rhyming cleverly flows and follows the masterfully constructed work, this is a great entry, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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This is an excellent tyburn poem, and a darn good entry in this contest my friend, The rhyming cleverly flows and follows the masterfully constructed work, this is a great entry, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Thanks for your terrific review!
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Well done
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I fear the very same thing as we in part lose our sanity with age and turn into our Mothers and Fathers! He he he, this is a fun write though and I enjoyed the sentiments, love Dolly x
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I fear the very same thing as we in part lose our sanity with age and turn into our Mothers and Fathers! He he he, this is a fun write though and I enjoyed the sentiments, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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Oh yes, we are all on the slippery slope to parody our parents.
Comment from Ronni
By gosh, I think you've got this one right on! Perfect picture
and fools lament is so sequentially, hilariously , and totally
relatable! Interesting presentation for this new kind of sty poem,
and good luck with your entry! Enjoyed the read. Please write
more of these and any others! Like wit and sense of humor!
Best wishes, Ronni
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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By gosh, I think you've got this one right on! Perfect picture
and fools lament is so sequentially, hilariously , and totally
relatable! Interesting presentation for this new kind of sty poem,
and good luck with your entry! Enjoyed the read. Please write
more of these and any others! Like wit and sense of humor!
Best wishes, Ronni
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2019
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I'm so pleased you enjoyed this silly poem. It is only the second one i have ever written, not being familiar with the form.
I enjoy humour myself, and often write funny little stories that are full of witty puns.
