Blended Reality
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Rey"A collection of stories: Some True, some not
25 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I found it to be heartbreaking. I can't imagine having to make a decision like that, but I understand your wife has to come first.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your story. I found it to be heartbreaking. I can't imagine having to make a decision like that, but I understand your wife has to come first.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Sandra, thank you for reading and commenting on Rey. Life is seldom an easy thing to live with "best plans". But, we adapt and move forward.
Comment from juliaSjames
So very sorry about the accident. My heart goes out to your wife and to Rey. I hope she's on the mend and that Rey has found another great family.
From the picture Rey is indeed a beautiful creature.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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So very sorry about the accident. My heart goes out to your wife and to Rey. I hope she's on the mend and that Rey has found another great family.
From the picture Rey is indeed a beautiful creature.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Julia, I will share your kind and compassionate words with my wife. I delight that I will be getting her home next week and continue with a long rehab schedule, so all will be made right again. We are very close to getting Rey Into a new home that will be good for all concerned.
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That's good news. God is in control.
JJ
Comment from Ricky1024
"Rey'
Was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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"Rey'
Was well written and rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
...
Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
E,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you for reviewing and commenting on my work.
Comment from Raul1
He looks like a friendly dog. So sorry to hear about your wife. I like your story. His name is good for a dog. Good luck in the contest! No grammatical errors.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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He looks like a friendly dog. So sorry to hear about your wife. I like your story. His name is good for a dog. Good luck in the contest! No grammatical errors.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thanks Raul.
Comment from brenda bickers
Oh my God,
this story just had me in tears. This must be so hard for you. Our pets become part of the family and to lose one is like loosing a child. I wish I could take her and love her as you have, but I am so far away. I hope she finds a new home that will love her as you have. Good luck.
Brenda.x
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Oh my God,
this story just had me in tears. This must be so hard for you. Our pets become part of the family and to lose one is like loosing a child. I wish I could take her and love her as you have, but I am so far away. I hope she finds a new home that will love her as you have. Good luck.
Brenda.x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Brenda, yes it is difficult! But we move ahead. Thanks for reviewing and commenting on my poem
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
oh goodness, where do you live? My puppy dog here isn't so good lately. I loved reading your story. We have always loved and had labs. I hope that your wife didn't have to have another bout of surgery. So sorry this happen.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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oh goodness, where do you live? My puppy dog here isn't so good lately. I loved reading your story. We have always loved and had labs. I hope that your wife didn't have to have another bout of surgery. So sorry this happen.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Rosemary, we live near Asheville, NC. I believe we are done with operations...yeah! Thanks for reviewing and commenting on my poem.
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did you find a home for your dog?
Comment from JudyE
What a sad ending to a beautiful relationship. Labradors have the most wonderful temperaments. I'm sure Rey will make an ideal therapy dog.
Just one glitch: and heafty fifty-five pounds - spelling - hefty.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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What a sad ending to a beautiful relationship. Labradors have the most wonderful temperaments. I'm sure Rey will make an ideal therapy dog.
Just one glitch: and heafty fifty-five pounds - spelling - hefty.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thank you silly me...fixed lol
Comment from Tpa
Very sorry for your loss. You told a good story. It appeared that Rev was a gentle dog who filled your life with pleasant memories. I also hope your wife recovered from her injury. Wishing you the best.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Very sorry for your loss. You told a good story. It appeared that Rev was a gentle dog who filled your life with pleasant memories. I also hope your wife recovered from her injury. Wishing you the best.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thank,you.
Comment from Tpa
Very sorry for your loss. You told a good story. It appeared that Rev was a gentle dog who filled your life with pleasant memories. I also hope your wife recovered from her injury. Wishing you the best.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Very sorry for your loss. You told a good story. It appeared that Rev was a gentle dog who filled your life with pleasant memories. I also hope your wife recovered from her injury. Wishing you the best.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This story, Rey, is very upbeat for almost its entirety. The clash at the end and ouster of the animal seemed almost unrelated to the rest of the story. Hope the hip is okay.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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This story, Rey, is very upbeat for almost its entirety. The clash at the end and ouster of the animal seemed almost unrelated to the rest of the story. Hope the hip is okay.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2019
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Bill, thanks
