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My Snake Phobia

From my youngest memories to adulthood

33 total reviews 
Comment from NickieT
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I enjoy the different settings for which you have highlighted this snake phobia. You are not alone in your fear - in fact evidence suggests that there is a primal part of our brains designed to recognize and respond negatively in the presence of slithering motion. That being said, in your first stanza, I think that you may have meant " a snake slithered" instead of "slivered"

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    Nickie, yes I certainly had a goof....fixed however thanks much!
Comment from Bill Pinder
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If this is based on a true story, I don't know how you survived Vietnam. Those snakes would scare the bejeebers out of a person without a snake phobia. Hope you don't see one in real life anytime soon.
Bill

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    Bill, true actually happened and I am still shaking from it...
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written heartfelt poem about your phobia about shakes that originated from a young age and got worse when you encounter more fearsome snakes.

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 Comment Written 23-Oct-2019


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
    Sandra, I would be more than happy to never come across another snake...