The Promise
God's gift of the partaking of the chalice48 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
I really liked this etheree poem JLR. A wonderful message entwined in this piece. Perfect artwork to accompany your well written poem.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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I really liked this etheree poem JLR. A wonderful message entwined in this piece. Perfect artwork to accompany your well written poem.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Janet, thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your etheree is well-written and movingly spiritual. Individuals, families, communities, and nations are all capable of allowing humane traits and
spirituality decline. We need to pray--a lot.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Your etheree is well-written and movingly spiritual. Individuals, families, communities, and nations are all capable of allowing humane traits and
spirituality decline. We need to pray--a lot.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Janice. We certainly do!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello mystery writer. You're poem complies with the requirements for an etheree style. You have submitted a nicely written spiritual poem for the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Hello mystery writer. You're poem complies with the requirements for an etheree style. You have submitted a nicely written spiritual poem for the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Robert, thank you!
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You're welcome
Comment from rjuselius
this is a fine entry for this particular writing prompt dear anonymous! I like the spiritual dimension and the delightful way you handle it.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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this is a fine entry for this particular writing prompt dear anonymous! I like the spiritual dimension and the delightful way you handle it.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a super squeeze!
rebekka xxx
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Rebekka, thank you!
Comment from lauralumummu
Lovely poem with a great flow. Its so hard to find these virtues in humanity today. It is the consensus that everybody lies but we should all make truth an integral part of our life. All the best, Laura
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Lovely poem with a great flow. Its so hard to find these virtues in humanity today. It is the consensus that everybody lies but we should all make truth an integral part of our life. All the best, Laura
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Laura, thank you!
Comment from Joy Graham
Hello Mystery Poet,
This picture and message takes me back to the Indiana Jones movie where they are told to choose the chalice wisely. It ended up being the plain chalice as opposed to the fancy ones. Indiana Jones was able to save his father's life for choosing the right one.
Too bad your etheree didn't take a better shape on the page. The contest doesn't say you have to get any shape, so it's okay. Just something I try to work on. Although I rarely get a nice shape myself.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Hello Mystery Poet,
This picture and message takes me back to the Indiana Jones movie where they are told to choose the chalice wisely. It ended up being the plain chalice as opposed to the fancy ones. Indiana Jones was able to save his father's life for choosing the right one.
Too bad your etheree didn't take a better shape on the page. The contest doesn't say you have to get any shape, so it's okay. Just something I try to work on. Although I rarely get a nice shape myself.
Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Joy thanks, I would have preferred a better format also. Perhaps next time.
Comment from Mame
Skilfully created Etheree here. The painting is terrific/ is it from Fan Art? A simple but needed message here and sometimes forgotten. Our materialistic world certainly needs some renovation.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Skilfully created Etheree here. The painting is terrific/ is it from Fan Art? A simple but needed message here and sometimes forgotten. Our materialistic world certainly needs some renovation.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Yes, the image is a fan story selection.
Comment from Bill Schott
This etheree, The Promise, has the proper one-to-ten descending syllable formatting and looks forward to all that has been planned for us. Nice.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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This etheree, The Promise, has the proper one-to-ten descending syllable formatting and looks forward to all that has been planned for us. Nice.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Bill, thank you.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This is a dense poem, massive because of the chosen symbols:the holy grail as a promise for a better life. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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This is a dense poem, massive because of the chosen symbols:the holy grail as a promise for a better life. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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Iza, thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Liberty Justice
SIX STARS 6******LOVELY HOW you quest for knowledge and pray for rapid change and awesome spiritual references to passages. Read Review mine also.lolol liberty justice
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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SIX STARS 6******LOVELY HOW you quest for knowledge and pray for rapid change and awesome spiritual references to passages. Read Review mine also.lolol liberty justice
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019
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I will certainly do so, thanks for the invitation.
