Chosen Reflections
An Etheree Poem Contest Offering14 total reviews
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is a well written entry for the etheree contest, my friend. I truly love the last line. If only I could feel that way every day. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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This is a well written entry for the etheree contest, my friend. I truly love the last line. If only I could feel that way every day. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from lyenochka
Great attitude toward the mirror! I like the focus on:
"as gentle laugh lines frame
a bright and still-youthful smile."
That's what people will notice most - the warm and shining smile! Best to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Great attitude toward the mirror! I like the focus on:
"as gentle laugh lines frame
a bright and still-youthful smile."
That's what people will notice most - the warm and shining smile! Best to you in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Gail Denham
You've said it and I agree - choose the eyes perhaps that shine out life and behind them you can almost see the stories and poems that wait to be written - choose the mouth that can smile at strangers or clerks in the store, perhaps giving an encouragement.
Nice poem
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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You've said it and I agree - choose the eyes perhaps that shine out life and behind them you can almost see the stories and poems that wait to be written - choose the mouth that can smile at strangers or clerks in the store, perhaps giving an encouragement.
Nice poem
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2019
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Thanx for your review on this one, Gail -- so very appreciated!! ;) :) Yvette
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Chosen Reflections", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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"Chosen Reflections", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Etheree Poem contest.
Your story is clear as many of us see too much gray in the mirror these days.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Etheree Poem contest.
Your story is clear as many of us see too much gray in the mirror these days.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dawn Munro
What a delightful poem, but if you don't mind, I have one critique: how come YOU get to get rid of the 'gray' you don't want to see, and I can't? ... Maybe if I painted my mirror...(LOL)
Good luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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What a delightful poem, but if you don't mind, I have one critique: how come YOU get to get rid of the 'gray' you don't want to see, and I can't? ... Maybe if I painted my mirror...(LOL)
Good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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LOL! Thank you for the review!
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:) To thank me, send help for my gray, won'tcha. :) Yi-iii-kes!
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I color most of mine a deep red-violet... :) :) :)
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I have resistant gray... Won't take ANY dye... :((((( whimper) OLD!!! OLD!!! OLD!!! (lol)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
And so it goes as we reflect our images through the years it is the young feeling that fights the truth of the imageBut, as in your well-done poem, we get to think whatever we want. The art was a good choice.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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And so it goes as we reflect our images through the years it is the young feeling that fights the truth of the imageBut, as in your well-done poem, we get to think whatever we want. The art was a good choice.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from June Sargent
They say life is all about choices. I like how you decide to just focus on the smile and not the gray hairs. Right choice. There are too many gray areas in our lives, so to speak. Let's not go there. Just enjoy the highlighted parts and leave the rest behind.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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They say life is all about choices. I like how you decide to just focus on the smile and not the gray hairs. Right choice. There are too many gray areas in our lives, so to speak. Let's not go there. Just enjoy the highlighted parts and leave the rest behind.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Etheree, the mirror never lies in what we choose to see. If we can see beyond the outer image we will see those qualities in the mirror. A youthful soul never gets old.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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A very well-written Etheree, the mirror never lies in what we choose to see. If we can see beyond the outer image we will see those qualities in the mirror. A youthful soul never gets old.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a deeply moving poem and our smiles can make other peoples lives improved and happy and choosing to smile and be happy encourages us to live well, I enjoyed your sentiments here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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This is a deeply moving poem and our smiles can make other peoples lives improved and happy and choosing to smile and be happy encourages us to live well, I enjoyed your sentiments here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you so much!