Moving Forward
Let's Continue6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A philosophical message here in your Etheree, I loved the flow and the sentiment and it was a bold move to go to the moon and we haven't done it since! Love Dolly x
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A philosophical message here in your Etheree, I loved the flow and the sentiment and it was a bold move to go to the moon and we haven't done it since! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Oct-2019
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your etheree is well-written and thought-provoking. I suppose the feverish interest in space travel that existed decades ago has died down due to the chaos that takes center stage now ?? Just a guess
"Wanning" -- Did you mean "waning"?
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Your etheree is well-written and thought-provoking. I suppose the feverish interest in space travel that existed decades ago has died down due to the chaos that takes center stage now ?? Just a guess
"Wanning" -- Did you mean "waning"?
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much, I'll check on that
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
Yes, really. I agree. It is a 'me now' world we live in with no clear (at least beneficial) path to the future. Well said, my friend. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Yes, really. I agree. It is a 'me now' world we live in with no clear (at least beneficial) path to the future. Well said, my friend. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from QC Poet
Great format fitting and well structured to match the photographic theme of the barren space and lone man on it. Praying we won't need that after ruining our atmosphere. Good Luck in the contest if entered. Blessings
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Great format fitting and well structured to match the photographic theme of the barren space and lone man on it. Praying we won't need that after ruining our atmosphere. Good Luck in the contest if entered. Blessings
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-You pose a good question.
-Good syllable count and form.
-A good topic and description.
-The message about "bold
adventures" is very good,
and needs to be addressed.
-You show why in the concluding lines.
-I agree; we need to broaden our horizons!
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-You pose a good question.
-Good syllable count and form.
-A good topic and description.
-The message about "bold
adventures" is very good,
and needs to be addressed.
-You show why in the concluding lines.
-I agree; we need to broaden our horizons!
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome.
Comment from JLR
Perfectly executed! Reminds us that once we as a nation had such great vision, such promise. We lost the quest to explore the heavens and we are letting our mother ship self consume. It seems we want to write our own ending.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Perfectly executed! Reminds us that once we as a nation had such great vision, such promise. We lost the quest to explore the heavens and we are letting our mother ship self consume. It seems we want to write our own ending.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you very much
