Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

That sounds like a good plan for after dinner. I must confess I spend too much time on the couch. Perambulating is a great way to burn off all the calories we like to eat at this time of year.

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019

I think most of us spend too much time on the couch. An evening stroll is rather enjoyable (except in the depths of winter).

Comment from A Little Bird

Exceptional

Congratulations on this excellent piece! The chosen image and color scheme complements your poem perfectly. Good luck with the competition! This entry ought to do well I think.

 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019

Thank you so much Abby. That is a very encouraging review.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

"Perambulant is an Obscure Word 7-9-7 Contest Entry"
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
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It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues as well.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
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Good luck with this and have a great weekend.
Doctor Ricky 1024

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 Comment Written 27-Oct-2019

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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2019

Thanks Ricky.
(The word is Perambulate.)