It's The Truth
Honestly11 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
Love is the reason for many good things including dating, marriage and babies. It could happen out of order. A good life still takes commitment and work. Nice work. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Love is the reason for many good things including dating, marriage and babies. It could happen out of order. A good life still takes commitment and work. Nice work. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 08-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2019
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Thank you, yes love is the reason for many things-mostly good-, much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
Well, well! I like how you've presented this and the well placed wording you've used. The picture enhances the effect and compliments your words. I enjoyed reading this humorous and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Well, well! I like how you've presented this and the well placed wording you've used. The picture enhances the effect and compliments your words. I enjoyed reading this humorous and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Y. M. Roger
And what our 'love made', yeah?! ;) :) Such a humorous offering for this unique contest - thank you for sharing that smile and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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And what our 'love made', yeah?! ;) :) Such a humorous offering for this unique contest - thank you for sharing that smile and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 04-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Ogden
Shame on you! You shouldn't be telling fibs about it.
Don
That;s all I wanted to say, but the system attempted to enforce he arbitrary requirement of 150 keystrokes, so NOW I've had my say.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Shame on you! You shouldn't be telling fibs about it.
Don
That;s all I wanted to say, but the system attempted to enforce he arbitrary requirement of 150 keystrokes, so NOW I've had my say.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
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Don't even mention it.
(Take my advice.)
Don
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Recently Married (senryu) contest.
Your story is well told in so few words. And the picture helps.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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I think this is a good entry for the Recently Married (senryu) contest.
Your story is well told in so few words. And the picture helps.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 04-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Patty Palmer
I like your poem that the bride and groom got married because of their love. I suppose it was time to be thinking about getting married. The first baby can come anytime but the next child takes nine months! LOL The picture of the bride and groom shows them looking happy and the love they are feeling for their soon to be born child. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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I like your poem that the bride and groom got married because of their love. I suppose it was time to be thinking about getting married. The first baby can come anytime but the next child takes nine months! LOL The picture of the bride and groom shows them looking happy and the love they are feeling for their soon to be born child. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Venessa Lee-Estevez
Very clever! I love the graphic you chose! Sometimes people can be extremely judgmental about people's choices. The couple did not have to marry because she was pregnant. They CHOSE to marry because they love one another. The baby will be an extension of their love.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Very clever! I love the graphic you chose! Sometimes people can be extremely judgmental about people's choices. The couple did not have to marry because she was pregnant. They CHOSE to marry because they love one another. The baby will be an extension of their love.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a humorous poem. The picture you chose tells the whole story. Nowadays, however, pregancy is no longer a reason to marry, as it was in the old days. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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This is a humorous poem. The picture you chose tells the whole story. Nowadays, however, pregancy is no longer a reason to marry, as it was in the old days. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Apriori
This is a great example of a poem that takes on an entirely different meaning when you compare it with its image complement. Nice job! The poem is funny and I enjoyed the surprise joke at the end that disrupted a cliche.
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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This is a great example of a poem that takes on an entirely different meaning when you compare it with its image complement. Nice job! The poem is funny and I enjoyed the surprise joke at the end that disrupted a cliche.
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the photo and the words are magical, this is an ideal entry for the contest and your words are full of a promise for a bright future, loved it, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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I love the photo and the words are magical, this is an ideal entry for the contest and your words are full of a promise for a bright future, loved it, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 02-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2019
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Thank you very much
