I See
What I see when I look at you...49 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
What a beautifully written poem about the one you love. I'd say you nailed the prompt.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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What a beautifully written poem about the one you love. I'd say you nailed the prompt.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Mike my friend, thank you as always!
Comment from Brian Hill
Wow, wow, wow...
I love how the piece honors a woman in your life. Great visual as I read this. Good luck and thank you.
"I see a romantic soul, who places a smile on my face" is a wonderful line...
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Wow, wow, wow...
I love how the piece honors a woman in your life. Great visual as I read this. Good luck and thank you.
"I see a romantic soul, who places a smile on my face" is a wonderful line...
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Brian, thank you for connecting with the depth of truth written.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What beautiful words your poem has within. It definitely expresses the beauty of all of our five senses. Thank you for making my day much better. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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What beautiful words your poem has within. It definitely expresses the beauty of all of our five senses. Thank you for making my day much better. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Rosemary, I am honored by your kind comments!
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed this poem. It flows well and has a nice feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the imagery you used. Thanks fo sharing this and have a really great day
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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I enjoyed this poem. It flows well and has a nice feel to it. I particularly enjoyed the imagery you used. Thanks fo sharing this and have a really great day
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you for reviewing and commenting in my poem.
Comment from Janetsue
This is a beautiful poem of appreciation and joy for your loved one. I can see why you're smiling as you ponder the lines and share your feelings. It is an excellent entry in the Senses contest! :-)
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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This is a beautiful poem of appreciation and joy for your loved one. I can see why you're smiling as you ponder the lines and share your feelings. It is an excellent entry in the Senses contest! :-)
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a beautifully composed poem. It speaks of intimate love for a partner without being sexual. It's obvious the writer knows his beloved well, her nuances. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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This is a beautifully composed poem. It speaks of intimate love for a partner without being sexual. It's obvious the writer knows his beloved well, her nuances. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Marilyn, thank you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, JLR, with your contest entry. Your words/lines flow smoothly with great emotion and imagery. Readers can feel the love you have for the one you are writing about. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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You did a great job, JLR, with your contest entry. Your words/lines flow smoothly with great emotion and imagery. Readers can feel the love you have for the one you are writing about. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 05-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Jan, thank you! Your comments are so encouraging that I am on the right path.
Comment from Patty Palmer
I see you picked the sense of sight. You describe what you feel looking at her. How comforting for you to be there with her. It gives you a feeling of giddiness looking into the depth of her eyes.
A great job well done.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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I see you picked the sense of sight. You describe what you feel looking at her. How comforting for you to be there with her. It gives you a feeling of giddiness looking into the depth of her eyes.
A great job well done.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Patty, I am one who simply could not fathom losing my sight....
Comment from Willosa
A very well crafted poem highlighting the sense of sight. The words capture the depth of feeling held for the woman in your sight. Not only descriptive of the writer's sense and what he is seeing but the reader can picture the woman too. I love the first line "my eyes consume your presence." Deserving of 6 stars, so here you are!
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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A very well crafted poem highlighting the sense of sight. The words capture the depth of feeling held for the woman in your sight. Not only descriptive of the writer's sense and what he is seeing but the reader can picture the woman too. I love the first line "my eyes consume your presence." Deserving of 6 stars, so here you are!
Comment Written 05-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Willosa, what a wonderful honor you have provided my work, I am very humbled, thank you!
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Thia is a beautiful post. As I read your poem, thoughts of my darling, deceased wife of sixty years came streaming through. It's nice to read that someone cares as much for their love as I still care for mine.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thia is a beautiful post. As I read your poem, thoughts of my darling, deceased wife of sixty years came streaming through. It's nice to read that someone cares as much for their love as I still care for mine.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Willie, first and foremost, my sincere condolences! My mate and I are in our 36th year, losing her would be bone crushing as I am certain you remain in your loss. Secondly, I am humbled by your generous six stars.
