Lucifer's Love
Ottava Rima Contest Entry3 total reviews
Comment from LyndaS
Wow! This is is an amazing take on Lucifer and his fall from heaven. He took many angels with him and this entry is a great reminder of that. The concept of him loving and being loved by one particular angel is fascinating to me. Can she still love him when he alone has damned her soul for all eternity? Your art you chose to accompany this is both haunting and stunning. I'd wish you luck in the booth but I'm pretty sure I just reviewed the winner. Extremely well done, poet. Lynda
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Wow! This is is an amazing take on Lucifer and his fall from heaven. He took many angels with him and this entry is a great reminder of that. The concept of him loving and being loved by one particular angel is fascinating to me. Can she still love him when he alone has damned her soul for all eternity? Your art you chose to accompany this is both haunting and stunning. I'd wish you luck in the booth but I'm pretty sure I just reviewed the winner. Extremely well done, poet. Lynda
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Wow, thank you so much for the fantastic review and big sixer, Lynda. I sure didn't plan on seeing one of those for this. Lol. I doubted if anyone would even read past the title. Yeah, I think I'd have to call off the relationship once I was thrown into hell for it. Haha. I found the pic in a search but added and took away some of it with an art program. She had clothes on in the original pic. I really appreciate the good luck wishes but I seriously doubt it'll fly with burnt wings. Lol. Thank you again, Lynda. I'm glad you liked my dark little love story. Have a great day.
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...fly with burnt wings... LMAO!!
Have a little faith Eeyore! You done good.
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Comment from moonsunrise
I have never heard of a Ottava Rima poem. I am learning so much from my FanStory family.
Lucifer's love is very deceiving as he roams about the earth trying to ruin souls.
This is a great reminder.
Thanks very much for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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I have never heard of a Ottava Rima poem. I am learning so much from my FanStory family.
Lucifer's love is very deceiving as he roams about the earth trying to ruin souls.
This is a great reminder.
Thanks very much for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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Thank you for the great review, Moonsunrise. I've never heard of it either so I figured I'd give it a try. This piece was more in the line of him having a love in Heaven before they were cast out. That's the angle I was going for here. But yes, he is doing his best to ruin souls here too. Thank you again. Have a great day.
Comment from papa55mike
This poem is wonderfully written, and the picture is frightening. Without God, can love exist? I kinda doubt it. Great job!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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This poem is wonderfully written, and the picture is frightening. Without God, can love exist? I kinda doubt it. Great job!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 06-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2019
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I doubt it too, Mike. Thank you for the kind review and good luck wishes, friend. I really appreciate it. You have a great day as well.