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Love Letter on a Clipboard #4

Response To My Secret Admirer #3

31 total reviews 
Comment from the13thpoet
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Hello Sally, I hope you had a wonderful weekend. I am so enjoying your love letter on a clipboard. It takes me back the times when there were no cellphones and text messages. A time when face to face interactions, love notes, and phone conversations at home (stretching that phone cord all through the house) were how you wooed your love interest. Just seems like everything today is about instant and self gratification and sex, love is an after thought or a accidental side effect.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Yes I live in this day and time where my kitchen phone cord stretched all the way out my front door and then some. That's the kind of love that I have with my husband and have boxes of letters between us. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Stay tuned. Sending my best today as always, Sally :)
Comment from Carla Trinklein
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So now we have a name, title and context for the mystery man! I'm glad he withheld his title, "doctor", for so long. Too many women would become blinded by that alone. And the fact that she already has an appreciation for his difficult father makes it more understandable how he would come to notice her. Still very much enjoying this story. I'm sorry I'm not very regular about writing or reviewing these days. My job as a kindergarten teacher has changed considerably this year. I've taken on a dual language Spanish/English classroom, and I am very preoccupation with doing it to the best of my ability. Between that and keeping up with my family, I'm just mentally very tired lately. Thanks for giving me an escape from the demands of my life with this wonderful story!

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Aw, I can just picture you settling down to read my love letter stories. I'm delighted that you're enjoying them. I am again, deeply honored by this, and appreciate the kind review.
    Sending you my best today as always, dear Carla,
    Sally xo
Comment from Debbie Pope
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You are such a romantic, Sally. I don't think that I have ever met anyone quite like you. Have you thought about writing Hallmark cards on the side? You are just so open with your thoughts, and you seem to feel what the opposite sex needs to hear.
I'm still wondering where you are going with this. I can't imagine what will happen at PT. You have my attention for sure.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    I know isn't it terrible? I am all these things and more. I appreciate you staying with me in the story and so glad you're enjoying it. Thank you again for the kind review.
    Sending you my best today as always, dear Debbie.
    Sal xo
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
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Well now she knows who is but, he can't have children so how will she feel now. I don't think I would be worried about that if it were me, esp at this age. =} Great as always. Rox

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    You have to stay with me and see. Thank you very much for the kind review and compliments. Stay tuned.
    Sending my best today as always, Sally xo
Comment from lyenochka
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Yay! He finally revealed his identity and more than that, he showed all of himself and the flaw that may end the relationship. But knowing Kristin, she won't reject him because of fertility! Great job with this deeply honest confession!

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Yahoo! A sixer from my friend, Helen. Thank you so much, dear little one. You have a big heart and showers of stars for me today. Thank you, it means so much to me. Sending you my best today as always
    Sal xoxo
reply by lyenochka on 18-Nov-2019
    You're always deserving, Sal. Just not enough sixes in a week! Hugs!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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The plot thickens. The reader is definitely drawn in closer as we learn more about the mystery man. The sign of a good reader is to be able to continually have a hold on their readers. In case any were thinking of postponing their reading you have lassoed them back in.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    I like that 'lassoed' comment, that appeals to me. :) Thank you so much for the kind compliments and excellent review.
    Sending my best today as always and it's good to know I'm not going to be losing you.
    Sally xo
Comment from Barbaraj1
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I loved this sweet romantic story. I wasn't sure where the story was
going and I hoped that it would have a happy ending. I wasn't
disappointed. By the way, good title.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much dear Barbara. This is an ongoing love story between two people at a hospital. Her reply is called, To My Secret Admirer and that will be my next installment. Both of these stories run in tandem and will end Christmas Eve eve of this year. I hope that you can catch them all, or go back and look at my portfolio for the ones that you've missed.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Smiles to you Sally Law
I enjoyed reading you Response To My Secret Admirer

"Love Letter on a Clipboard.
With the foll wing words of how of how sincere- you are

Take your time and think through your response. I am hopeful, as you have declared your mutual love and acceptance of me without knowing my life story. Now you know my deepest sorrows, fears, and longings

Gert


 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Thank you so much for your excellent review and kind compliments, dear Kurt. It is always so appreciated. I always love to see your name. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xo
reply by Gert sherwood on 18-Nov-2019
    Sally Law you are welcome and thank you for your nice reply.
    Gert
Comment from Alex Rosel
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I love this unfolding story. It's filled with emotion, and follows a tried and tested romance story arc {thumbs up}. When the culmination is reached, I feel sure there's going to be a final twist that needs to be overcome before these two are left to enjoy the rest of their lives together.

I didn't pick up on any spags.

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    You are so good. {Big smiles.} You don't miss a thing. Thank you for the outstanding review and kind compliments, dear Alex. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. I'm always awed by the men who follow these love stories. The FanStory men (and my husband) are turning out to be quite the romantics.
    Sending you my best today as always,
    Sally xo
Comment from Ulla
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Oh, Sally, this is such a lovely love story and it brings me to tears. I'm such a romantic old fool, but, hey, aren't we all? It's so well written. I Love it and I can't wait to see what her answer will be. Ulla. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
    Thank you, dear Ulla. Your superb review and kind compliments mean so much. I love to please my romantics the most. Thank you for staying with me and all of my chapters. Sending you my best today as always, Sally xoxo