Delightful Inanity
Sometimes, the mind just wanders...54 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
Wow! This poem is amazing and I like it the most. This does match the No net contest. I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
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Wow! This poem is amazing and I like it the most. This does match the No net contest. I think that this poem has a chance of winning the contest! Excellent work! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your review! ;)
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You're welcome.
Comment from Susan Larson
My husband is an electrical engineer and I have a masters degree in math and science education. Your "digital sync" (His company was Telesync, Inc.), "numerical haze" (we love playing math games and exchanging math puns with each other), and "tangible maze" ( I love labyrinths and created one in our former yard) make me think of they poetry he has written to me and my innumerable responses to him. I can really go with this!
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My husband is an electrical engineer and I have a masters degree in math and science education. Your "digital sync" (His company was Telesync, Inc.), "numerical haze" (we love playing math games and exchanging math puns with each other), and "tangible maze" ( I love labyrinths and created one in our former yard) make me think of they poetry he has written to me and my innumerable responses to him. I can really go with this!
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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So good to see your fun kitty-cat and read you this morning, Susan -- and you and your husband sound VERY MUCH like us: I'm the physicist and he's the EE [Torch Technologies, LLC] ! ;) It has certainly been a nutty week round here -- thanx much for your review as it certainly brings a smile to the tiredness I'm trying to shake this morning!! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
My apologies for running behind -- one of our science teachers had to take a leave of absence to care for her mom and I crazily volunteered to review/mark-up the physics & chemistry science project papers for her and meet with students as necessary....what was I thinking??! lol! I am now fully reminded why I ONLY teach mathematics -- I hardly have to think with pure numbers!! :) :)
Comment from lauralumummu
Exquisite another perfect poem. Great entry for the nonet contest. Thrill me with moonbeams interesting line. All the best in the contest, Laura------
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Exquisite another perfect poem. Great entry for the nonet contest. Thrill me with moonbeams interesting line. All the best in the contest, Laura------
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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So good to see your smile and read you this morning, Laura! ;) It has certainly been a nutty week round here -- thanx much for your review as it certainly brings a smile to the tiredness I'm trying to shake this morning!! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
My apologies for running behind -- one of our science teachers had to take a leave of absence to care for her mom and I crazily volunteered to review/mark-up the physics & chemistry science project papers for her and meet with students as necessary....what was I thinking??! lol! I am now fully reminded why I ONLY teach mathematics -- I hardly have to think with pure numbers!! :) :)
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Dear Yvette take care of you! I hope you put your feet up and have a nice cup of tea. Sunny and cold here with snow!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
It's beautifully written and presented, YM. I love the color scheme, the image, and the fantasy image gained after reading your well-chosen words. Great job with the prompt. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
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It's beautifully written and presented, YM. I love the color scheme, the image, and the fantasy image gained after reading your well-chosen words. Great job with the prompt. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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LOL! It has been a nutty week round here, Jan -- thanx much for your review as it certainly brings a smile to the tiredness I'm trying to shake this morning!! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
