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Comment from Pearl Edwards
I like the way you've entwined the wind with the different cycles of life and nature in your free verse. The ups and downs, spinning around through all we do. A combo of the spiritual and of nature, very creative.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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I like the way you've entwined the wind with the different cycles of life and nature in your free verse. The ups and downs, spinning around through all we do. A combo of the spiritual and of nature, very creative.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your Continued Support and Encouragement. Blessings to you!
Comment from country ranch writer
Very well put together on your take on the wind. It s very unpredictable and can make one happy or sad depending on things at the time.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Very well put together on your take on the wind. It s very unpredictable and can make one happy or sad depending on things at the time.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Thank you Very much for the review and compliments. God's Blessings to you.
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Msmiles
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An apt description of the winds and how it affects us and nature. We have high winds in the Canaries at times and the planes coming into land struggle, I have been on them when the winds are high and it is scary! Here it is a metaphor for life's turbulent cycles, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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An apt description of the winds and how it affects us and nature. We have high winds in the Canaries at times and the planes coming into land struggle, I have been on them when the winds are high and it is scary! Here it is a metaphor for life's turbulent cycles, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Thank you for your Valued Review and Compliments.
I'm Greatful as Always, Blessings!
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
each of it's frowns! (its)
Whether you walk on two's on fours are an eagle flying or slithering down below, (comma after fours)
A very well written and deeply meaningful poem, my friend. I think your poetic skills have greatly improved from when I first read your work. Keep on writing~Debbie
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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each of it's frowns! (its)
Whether you walk on two's on fours are an eagle flying or slithering down below, (comma after fours)
A very well written and deeply meaningful poem, my friend. I think your poetic skills have greatly improved from when I first read your work. Keep on writing~Debbie
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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As Always the Community Here is both Inspiring and Very Genuinely Helpful. Blessings!
I will revise shortly. Thanks again.