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Me and You - 40+ years of Poems V2

Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Perseverance "
Life, Love, Pain, Regrets, Struggles, Blessings

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Comment from lyenochka
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Oh my! I'm so sorry about having to deal with such a devastating illness. I have persevered and conquered! Great job with the single-word lines in your acrostic poem. Blessings of good health to you!

 Comment Written 17-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2019
    Thank you for the review and Health wishes, Blessings to you.
reply by lyenochka on 17-Nov-2019
    I just re-read what I wrote. I really meant that YOU have persevered and conquered! Lord bless you and give you strength everyday!
Comment from kahpot
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This is a very creative and clever Acrostic poem, if I had to ask anything it would be to have the poem on the left of the page, then the word-highlighted/bold capitals would be in line, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments. Blessings
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Acrostic Poetry contest.
Using one word per line makes this even harder to complete in a smooth manner, but you've done it nicely.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2019


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
    Thank you for the review and compliments. The Good Luck wishes are Greatly Appreciated.