Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Such a cool presentation and smart use of the title line for this acrostic 2-4-2 poem. I was wondering why the "NAB" was capitalized but I saw it when I read the poem!

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019

Thank you very much for the kind and uplifting feedback. It is truly valued and appreciated.

Comment from Bill Pinder

Excellent

You are definitely the queen of creativity! I need to add some gifs to some of mine. Great job with this creative entry for the contest. Great message that we all need to have aspirations that we are feeding.
Bill

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019

Thank you very much, Bill. Your time and encouraging feedback are always valued and appreciated.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Using only eight syllables (as required), you have conveyed a powerful,
uplifting message about perseverance. The poem stands alone, but the artwork is awesome too!

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2019

Thank you very much, Janice. Your time and encouraging feedback are always valued and appreciated.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

This is what a short form would be, or should be ambiguous in nature, so that it is many things in essence, and you've certainly nailed this one my friend, great presentation, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Thanks, Roy. Not much one can do when held to only 2-4-2 LOL.

reply by royowen on 20-Nov-2019

That?s right.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is a great entry for this contest and the fact you were able to create a great Acrostic. I enjoyed it immensely and feel it was beautifully written...love the illustration you picked for this one too. I sincerely wish you all the best.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Thanks much, dear friend. I always write then worry over artwork and this picture just leaped off the web as soon as I finished writing it. It seemed to speak to the aspirations of the young and old alike since we are NEVER to old to dream :).

reply by Sasha on 20-Nov-2019

I still don't know how to add a moving photo to my posts. Someone explained it to me once but the instructions were too complicated for me to comprehend.

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

First, find the GIF file (search for free GIFs using your usual search engine).
Right click on the image you want to use and select ?Properties?.
Select and then Copy the full address that shows up near the bottom of the Properties box.
Paste that address into your Word document where you typed your ramble so you can get to it easily later.
When you are posting into FS, use the Advanced Editor.
Put your entire post in as usual then place your blinking cursor where you want the moving picture to go.
Click on the Insert Picture icon (looks like a painting) which opens a dialog box. Paste the address of your GIF into the first text box in the new open window. When you tab down you should see both the picture and its size displayed. You can make it bigger or smaller or just click okay to insert it.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

What a lovely employment of this form, Angel, and a great acronym adaptation in your title! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Thanks much, Yvette. Your kind feedback is always appreciated.

Comment from Alchera

Excellent

Another Jewel of yours popped out as you were thinking abstractly. Also in Italian it is beautifully translated into" nutrite ispirazioni di frutto acerbo". It's perfectly set for the 2/4/2 poetry contest entry throughout its poetical versification structure, its narrative storylined content and the magical selected moving picture.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Thanks much, dear friend. I love the Italian translation :) some things simply don't translate well from English but this kind of sounds romantic LOL.

reply by Alchera on 20-Nov-2019

Angel that's what came out when I read your jewellery poem.Now I am setting out old poems of mine, which are so many, and I'll start filling my collection Alcheringa translating them from Italian. this morning the poem: Emigrants, etc I am completing "La Buca Blue" The Blue Whole my first international "noir" novel in Italian. Blessings from Salerno. Where are you from? may I ask? Tony

reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

I am in the USA - state of Tennessee (kind of the center).

reply by Alchera on 20-Nov-2019

I have enough poems in Italian on this site,too. I am translating Alcheringa from Italian because they popped out so I must switch them into English. Blessings. Tony

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a very nicely done 2-4-2 Poetry contest entry.
Your message is clear and to the point.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Sharon

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Thanks much, Sharon. Your time and kind feedback are truly appreciated.

Comment from Wils

Exceptional

This should be a bumper sticker. I found it very motivational and love the artwork. Great work six stars all the way. Good luck in the contest.
Geoff

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

WOW! Thanks so very much, Geoff! You cannot imagine how much it means to me to have touched another heart in a few simple words. You have totally made my day AND inspire me to keep nurturing my own aspirations to full bloom.

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This is a lovely contribution for the short short poem contest. The words work well to convey an inspirational message and I enjoyed reading it. The picture is a great addition.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2019

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reply by the author on 20-Nov-2019

Thank you very much, Susan. Your time and kind feedback are greatly valued and appreciated.