John Shane & The Dairy Farmer
Humorous western script27 total reviews
Comment from J.T. Blossom
I could visualize this well on a stage. Some very funny lines without rubbing people the wrong way too badly. Seems costumes would be important for this one!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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I could visualize this well on a stage. Some very funny lines without rubbing people the wrong way too badly. Seems costumes would be important for this one!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Yes, period costumes! Thank you for your review.
Comment from robyn corum
CC,
hahaha It seems that John and Shorty get into all kinds of situations, don't they? I hadn't thought about it, but I guess I didn't realize popcorn was available back in the West. haha I write Westerns, also. Haven't ever given popcorn one thought. Very interesting! Thank you!
Nicely done and entertaining. Loved the image of those guys pulling the cow prop across the stage with a rope. Fun!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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CC,
hahaha It seems that John and Shorty get into all kinds of situations, don't they? I hadn't thought about it, but I guess I didn't realize popcorn was available back in the West. haha I write Westerns, also. Haven't ever given popcorn one thought. Very interesting! Thank you!
Nicely done and entertaining. Loved the image of those guys pulling the cow prop across the stage with a rope. Fun!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Thank you for reviewing today!
Comment from Earl Corp
Hard to believe someone in 1896 Wyoming has never milked a cow. i wonder what the fascination with popcorn is. Interesting script, are you taking it further? Or is this a one-shot deal?
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Hard to believe someone in 1896 Wyoming has never milked a cow. i wonder what the fascination with popcorn is. Interesting script, are you taking it further? Or is this a one-shot deal?
Comment Written 16-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019
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Well, Shorty is from Kansas City or back east. This is a little prequel to a longer script I might post after the holidays. There were two other short scripts using those characters I posted earlier called "John Shane Gets A Sidekick" and "Maurice de Fleess" where they meet a French fur trapper. Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from judiverse
Great work with this. I enjoyed the dialog and you did a great job with the dialect. The Swedish were such wonderful settlers in the U.S. How fortunate that John and Shorty met up with a dairy farmer. I'm glad Swen had Jersey cows. My dad always had Jerseys. You have a clever way of showing the cows, too. Very enjoyable, and I'm glad you're writing scripts. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed more of your work, but it seems like things always come up that prevent me for reviewing as much as I'd like to. judi
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Great work with this. I enjoyed the dialog and you did a great job with the dialect. The Swedish were such wonderful settlers in the U.S. How fortunate that John and Shorty met up with a dairy farmer. I'm glad Swen had Jersey cows. My dad always had Jerseys. You have a clever way of showing the cows, too. Very enjoyable, and I'm glad you're writing scripts. I'm sorry I haven't reviewed more of your work, but it seems like things always come up that prevent me for reviewing as much as I'd like to. judi
Comment Written 15-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Thank you so much for the six-star review! I only post one to three times a week anyway, so you are probably not behind :)
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You're welcome. I can't keep up with those who post twice a day! judi
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your script, CC. Your characters are hilarious in their parts. The John Wayne character is true to life. Shorty is short some brains I think. Your lines flow well with good descriptive words. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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I enjoyed your script, CC. Your characters are hilarious in their parts. The John Wayne character is true to life. Shorty is short some brains I think. Your lines flow well with good descriptive words. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love, Jan
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Yes, Shorty is short in more than one way. Thank you so much for reviewing today.
Comment from RShipp
Loved the farming humor for a cowboy who seems to know so little about farming. Guess he thought all cattle were male?
The dialogue was great. You did a wonderful job with the spoken accents!
Loved the misunderstanding on how Farmer Sven acquired his farm. (I suspect that Sven's father knew exactly what he was doing!)
Great job!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Loved the farming humor for a cowboy who seems to know so little about farming. Guess he thought all cattle were male?
The dialogue was great. You did a wonderful job with the spoken accents!
Loved the misunderstanding on how Farmer Sven acquired his farm. (I suspect that Sven's father knew exactly what he was doing!)
Great job!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Thank you bunches for your astute review!
Comment from JudyE
I chuckled my way through this and enjoyed the Swedish dialogue, and particularly the choice of name for the dairy farmer. I didn't pick up anything that needed correction.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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I chuckled my way through this and enjoyed the Swedish dialogue, and particularly the choice of name for the dairy farmer. I didn't pick up anything that needed correction.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019
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Thank you bunches for reviewing today.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ummmmmm... I am completely and udderly taken aback. Did that cow just tip over when I tried to milk her?
Waddaya mean, it were not a cow?
Hahahaha. Okay, that's it, done pulling your leg. (But I am still flamboozled...)
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Ummmmmm... I am completely and udderly taken aback. Did that cow just tip over when I tried to milk her?
Waddaya mean, it were not a cow?
Hahahaha. Okay, that's it, done pulling your leg. (But I am still flamboozled...)
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you for reviewing today!
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a well-written, interesting script. The dialogue seems realistic and your characters seem like quite characters, really come to life. I love the added humor. thanks for the laugh.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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This is a well-written, interesting script. The dialogue seems realistic and your characters seem like quite characters, really come to life. I love the added humor. thanks for the laugh.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Thank you very much for reviewing and the specific comments.
Comment from Sugarray77
I really enjoyed reading your script and the fun western/Scandinavian dialogue you used. The theme was fun and was clever to use in the humor. Well done... wish I had a six star for your... tis that good. :)
Melissa
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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I really enjoyed reading your script and the fun western/Scandinavian dialogue you used. The theme was fun and was clever to use in the humor. Well done... wish I had a six star for your... tis that good. :)
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2019
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Aw, thanks for the review! A virtual six-star makes me smile.
