Comment from Diana L Crawford

Exceptional

Sorry I'm just catching up since holidays! Well, off they go to help in the fight. It seems Dylan's pals might a a bit overwhelmed by the revelation of dragons in their midst! Ha! The new discovery of venom may come in handy in the battle! Looking forward to the next part! xoxo

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 05-Jan-2020

Thanks for the six! Yep, his pals are a little freaked out, but they'll be happy to have them around shortly.

reply by Diana L Crawford on 05-Jan-2020

Very deserved! Love this story!!

Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

"the grizzly feast" - " the grisly feast"



" in a much better mood" - " in a good mood"

"they hadn't had this morning" - "that morning"

A well written chapter, Cindy. It's fascinating to learn more about the dragons and you use the encounter with Dylan's men to good effect. As they learn so do your readers.

Blessings Julia

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2019

Thanks. I'll fix that. Guess they're not eating a Grizzly. Glad you enjoyed the chapter.

Comment from tfawcus

Exceptional

Another fine chapter in which you show off the prowess of the troupe of dragons. I like the way you are gradually feeding in more attributes as they mature - the poison and the mental images. Looking forward to the next chapter.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2019

Thanks. Lots of action coming up!

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Sounds like the dragons are prepared for battle indeed even if they are little show-offs. Giving them the ability to poison adds another dimension to the story. Their exploits are entertaining.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019

Thanks. They think they're ready. Hope you'll stay tuned and see how they do.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

They sound ready enough. The little dragons can act like drones and scout with not being seen. People would assume they're birds.

"Men, meet Aaron's dragons. They won't hurt you, but Aaron will if anyone raises a weapon to them." <-- He is like a father to them... how sweet. :)

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019

Thanks. The dragons are still very young, and it would be a dull story if they didn't mess up a bit. Yep, Aaron is pretty protective of them.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed this chapter, Cindy. I like the way the dragons showed off--each trying to outdo the other. I know they will be vital when the battles start. You did a good job introducing the dragons to the men and having them accepted. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully with Love, jan

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2019

Thanks. There's lots of action coming up. Hope you'll enjoy it.

Comment from RShipp

Excellent

Nothing like a good dragon story!

If I were one of Aaron's men, I would have been far more than merely apprehensive when a flock of dragons landed near me. Shooting them would have been the last thing I thought of. Who wants a pee-ed of dragon after them. Haha

I liked the idea in the story however... I'm just not the 'brave-in-the-face-of-dragon-swarms' type.

Enjoyed the read. Can't wait to see what happens next.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Aaron found the eggs, hatched them, and now they're starting to grow up, tho they're still pretty small. A couple more chapters and I'm going to buy a book balloon for anyone who wants to catch up.

reply by RShipp on 15-Dec-2019

I have enjoyed the story so far. I have just very recently joined this site, but I am enjoying the great interactions!

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

What a great chapter. I love how they discovered their Venum. I bet the poor creature was confused not sure what happened or what to do. I do hope they do well in their upcoming battle. Watching they hatch, grow I've become very fond of the little fellows.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019

Thanks. I've had so much fun with these little guys I'm going to have to do a sequel when this is done. Figuring out what would hatch from each egg and what it would become was a bit of a challenge, but worth it. Glad you're still enjoying them.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I love the idea of dragons that can blow fire and talk, but there's a new factor emerging, that dragons have the ability to poison their potential victims and their supper, I love this sort science fantasy with these magical creatures, and men. With enough malevolence around to make it riveting. Well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019

Thanks. No, the dragons can't poison people with their supper. Venom is different from poison. Like snakes, you're in no danger unless you're bitten. You could eat a highly venomous snake, or an animal it has bitten, and be in no danger at all. But they have plenty of other abilities. You probably wouldn't want to piss one off. LOL

reply by royowen on 15-Dec-2019

Comment from damommy

Exceptional

Well, the battle is on, or soon will be. I'm so nervous for the little dragons, but I bet they can take care of themselves. The element of surprise will go a long way to protect them.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2019

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2019

Thanks for the six! Yes, the battle will be on in the next chapter. The men needed to meet their allies first, or they'd have been shooting at them! Lots of excitement coming up.

reply by damommy on 15-Dec-2019

Oh, boy!