Coconut Sunrise
A Minute Poem entry19 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
This is so pretty June. You make me want to turn away from the winter blast and go visit the tropics for a long visit. Your Minute poem is very well done and a perfect entry. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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This is so pretty June. You make me want to turn away from the winter blast and go visit the tropics for a long visit. Your Minute poem is very well done and a perfect entry. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this Minute poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments!
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written minute poem that projects marvellous imagery, even though the scene of the artwork does that exactly as well, beautiful job on this poem June, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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A beautifully written minute poem that projects marvellous imagery, even though the scene of the artwork does that exactly as well, beautiful job on this poem June, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this Minute poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments!
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Most welcome
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a beautiful entry for the Minute contest.
Your nicely rhymed verse is well matched by the artwork.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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I think this is a beautiful entry for the Minute contest.
Your nicely rhymed verse is well matched by the artwork.
Well done and I wish you lots of luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this Minute poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments!
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing this glorious, new day with us. I enjoyed the rhymes in your Minute Poem and your use of the alliteration of "s's" plus the perfect artwork to intensify the mood. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing this glorious, new day with us. I enjoyed the rhymes in your Minute Poem and your use of the alliteration of "s's" plus the perfect artwork to intensify the mood. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this Minute poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The image and your words are fascinating. Love the picture of the sunrise, coconuts hanging. The poem tells us the birds are flying high in the night's air's mist. The stars retire for the night and morning breaks again.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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The image and your words are fascinating. Love the picture of the sunrise, coconuts hanging. The poem tells us the birds are flying high in the night's air's mist. The stars retire for the night and morning breaks again.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this Minute poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, June. Your words create great imagery. I could 'see' all the beautiful 'things' you mentioned. Great job with the minute style. I like your super picture you paired with your poem. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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This is a great contest entry, June. Your words create great imagery. I could 'see' all the beautiful 'things' you mentioned. Great job with the minute style. I like your super picture you paired with your poem. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully with Love, Jan
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this Minute poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments!
Comment from heavenempress
Hi, nice and exciting piece of work and I liked the relevant image. Also, your vocabulary is rich. Your work is absolutely attractive and nice presentation of stanzas. I highly recommend your work to others.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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Hi, nice and exciting piece of work and I liked the relevant image. Also, your vocabulary is rich. Your work is absolutely attractive and nice presentation of stanzas. I highly recommend your work to others.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this Minute poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an uplifting poem with a rhyme scheme that really works. I enjoyed reading this short piece. Your words are well chosen. The picture sets it off very nicely.
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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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This is an uplifting poem with a rhyme scheme that really works. I enjoyed reading this short piece. Your words are well chosen. The picture sets it off very nicely.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this Minute poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments!
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is a lovely minute poem, June. I like the amber, golden colors. It's been so long since I have appreciated the warmth and possibilities of a sunrise. That's when our second chances begin. We need to embrace the possibilities of the new day and let mistakes and ambivalence retire with the stars.
This is nice.
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reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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This is a lovely minute poem, June. I like the amber, golden colors. It's been so long since I have appreciated the warmth and possibilities of a sunrise. That's when our second chances begin. We need to embrace the possibilities of the new day and let mistakes and ambivalence retire with the stars.
This is nice.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2019
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So glad you enjoyed this Minute poem. Thank you for taking the time to read and share your sentiments!
