Playgrounds secrets
The mystery of pebbles on a beach48 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Elizabeth Rose
Very well done look a stone pebbles on a beach. I enjoyed your poem. The rhyme and rhythm worked well to tell the story. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and good luck in the contest. ~Brenda
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Very well done look a stone pebbles on a beach. I enjoyed your poem. The rhyme and rhythm worked well to tell the story. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and good luck in the contest. ~Brenda
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2019
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Brenda, Thank you for the time you spent review and comment on my poem.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Playground's Secrets, presented in cascading rhyming couplets, finds the observer pondering the history of the tiny specks we see on the beach. What former mountain lays before us now?
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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This poem, Playground's Secrets, presented in cascading rhyming couplets, finds the observer pondering the history of the tiny specks we see on the beach. What former mountain lays before us now?
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Bill yes the ever on-going recycling is amazing!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello JLR, I love your choice of art for the competition - an ever changing art which is at the mercy of the tides. Your couplets are very well written and I particularly like -
Bending down to grab a handful of pebbles, so smooth to my touch.
My mind reels in the knowledge that I hold centuries in my clutch.
Good luck in the contest - Happy New Year to you and yours - regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Hello JLR, I love your choice of art for the competition - an ever changing art which is at the mercy of the tides. Your couplets are very well written and I particularly like -
Bending down to grab a handful of pebbles, so smooth to my touch.
My mind reels in the knowledge that I hold centuries in my clutch.
Good luck in the contest - Happy New Year to you and yours - regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Dorothy, thank you for your kind review and well wishes.
Comment from TPAC
I admire the smooth flow in this composition structuring, finding the items used as ingredients properly stirred forming this creation. A very touching read in my stated opinion.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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I admire the smooth flow in this composition structuring, finding the items used as ingredients properly stirred forming this creation. A very touching read in my stated opinion.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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TPAC, I do thank you for the time your took to read and comment on my work. Happy, New Year to you and your loved ones.
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I really enjoyed reading it. You have addressed something I have wondered about for a very long time. Well done.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poem. I really enjoyed reading it. You have addressed something I have wondered about for a very long time. Well done.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Sandra, isn't nature and amazing encyclopedia of information, art, science and pure pleasure....
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was quite a thought-provoking poem, JLR, I'd never looked at pebbles that way before, but you're right, some have been around more centuries than we realise. I enjoyed reading your thoughts in this poem. Well done! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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That was quite a thought-provoking poem, JLR, I'd never looked at pebbles that way before, but you're right, some have been around more centuries than we realise. I enjoyed reading your thoughts in this poem. Well done! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Sandra, thank you very much!
Comment from Gloria ....
What a neat idea for a contest. Cammycards is one of my favourites from FanArtReview.
Excellent rhyming couplets and I much enjoy your juxtaposing the small picture to the big picture.
Best of luck to you in the voting booth, J. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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What a neat idea for a contest. Cammycards is one of my favourites from FanArtReview.
Excellent rhyming couplets and I much enjoy your juxtaposing the small picture to the big picture.
Best of luck to you in the voting booth, J. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Gloria, thank you very much!
Comment from Alchera
Eight beautifully rhymed simply written couplets which enclosed, in a pensive glance, a flashback of human short historical existential miserable conditions on Mother Earth through the comparison of "a grabbed handful of pebbles" and its history. Your pebbles took me to Matthew Arnold's pebbles in his poem Dover Beach that he wrote during his honeymoon.Great Work. Blessings Tony
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Eight beautifully rhymed simply written couplets which enclosed, in a pensive glance, a flashback of human short historical existential miserable conditions on Mother Earth through the comparison of "a grabbed handful of pebbles" and its history. Your pebbles took me to Matthew Arnold's pebbles in his poem Dover Beach that he wrote during his honeymoon.Great Work. Blessings Tony
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Tony, thank you very much! I am truly humbled by your words and six-star review.
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You are Always welcomed. Tony if
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love this one JLR and your thoughts as you wander the beach, stopping to pick up pebbles that may or may not be there when the tide turns once more.
Bending down to grab a handful of pebbles, so smooth to my touch.
My mind reels in the knowledge that I hold centuries in my clutch.
love those lines, great write.
cheers
valda
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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I love this one JLR and your thoughts as you wander the beach, stopping to pick up pebbles that may or may not be there when the tide turns once more.
Bending down to grab a handful of pebbles, so smooth to my touch.
My mind reels in the knowledge that I hold centuries in my clutch.
love those lines, great write.
cheers
valda
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Valda, thank you very much! I am truly humbled by your words and six-star review.
Comment from lyenochka
Beautiful and artistic reflection on these pebbles by the shore! My favorite line was:
"My mind reels in the knowledge that I hold centuries in my clutch."
"Walking near waters edge I watch the eddy fight" (water's)
I think you'll do well in the contest!!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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Beautiful and artistic reflection on these pebbles by the shore! My favorite line was:
"My mind reels in the knowledge that I hold centuries in my clutch."
"Walking near waters edge I watch the eddy fight" (water's)
I think you'll do well in the contest!!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2019
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thank you very much!
