Playgrounds secrets
The mystery of pebbles on a beach48 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a vividly descriptive, skillfully written, delightful poem. You have conveyed a powerful message about appreciation for nature's offerings.
I especially like your ponderings about "how few years I have been around."
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This is a vividly descriptive, skillfully written, delightful poem. You have conveyed a powerful message about appreciation for nature's offerings.
I especially like your ponderings about "how few years I have been around."
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
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Janice, thank you for reviewing and commenting on this poem.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I have never known anyone see so much in pebbles! Stones are ancient it is hard to know just how old they are! You made me smile with your poem here, love Dolly x
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I have never known anyone see so much in pebbles! Stones are ancient it is hard to know just how old they are! You made me smile with your poem here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
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Dolly, I delight that this brought a smile to your face!
Comment from glindaboy52
Very nice use of metaphors in describing the playground of life. It is always in motion, forever changing. As we witness through you beautiful symbols described as wash ashore pebbles. You observe these pebbles in the course of their change just as each day is a change of earth. Very nice!
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Very nice use of metaphors in describing the playground of life. It is always in motion, forever changing. As we witness through you beautiful symbols described as wash ashore pebbles. You observe these pebbles in the course of their change just as each day is a change of earth. Very nice!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
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I am truly humbled by your generous six-star review!
Comment from Therese Caron
This is a very unique and wonderful poem. My favorite line hit me instantly - my mind reels in the knowledge that I hold centuries in my clutch. Very well worded. Great rhyming. Perfect picture. A wonderful contest entry. Good luck!
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This is a very unique and wonderful poem. My favorite line hit me instantly - my mind reels in the knowledge that I hold centuries in my clutch. Very well worded. Great rhyming. Perfect picture. A wonderful contest entry. Good luck!
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
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I delight in your kind review and comments, thank you for the good wishes.
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
I love that you find interest in everything that surrounds you and your mind rushes on to analyze. You held the fossils in your hand and wondered how many shores they have kissed and returned them to perpetuity. I loved the reading of this poem. I should have waited until tomorrow and give you 6 stars.
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I love that you find interest in everything that surrounds you and your mind rushes on to analyze. You held the fossils in your hand and wondered how many shores they have kissed and returned them to perpetuity. I loved the reading of this poem. I should have waited until tomorrow and give you 6 stars.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
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Raffaelina your kind review is a six in and of itself, thank you!
Comment from rjuselius
indeed, the stone can be caressed by the ocean and bring a healing power.
thanks for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a hearty hug-it-out hug!
rebekka x
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indeed, the stone can be caressed by the ocean and bring a healing power.
thanks for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a hearty hug-it-out hug!
rebekka x
Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
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I thank you profoundly!
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is an interesting poem and interesting artwork. I like your use of art in nature. Isn't that where all art comes from? Isn't nature the ultimate inspiration for beauty and perfection? I particularly like the last line which aptly shows the perspective of the art viewer. I like the idea of nature providing the viewing spot to observe its mighty work.
Nice job with this one. This is an excellent response to the prompt.
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This is an interesting poem and interesting artwork. I like your use of art in nature. Isn't that where all art comes from? Isn't nature the ultimate inspiration for beauty and perfection? I particularly like the last line which aptly shows the perspective of the art viewer. I like the idea of nature providing the viewing spot to observe its mighty work.
Nice job with this one. This is an excellent response to the prompt.
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
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Debbie, thank you. Yes it is always nature that inspires mind to take up my pen.
Comment from Sally Law
I think this is artistic and beautifully penned, dear J. A contest winner in my eyes. Your poem flowed smoothly and took me there in my mind's eye.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest.
Sally :)
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I think this is artistic and beautifully penned, dear J. A contest winner in my eyes. Your poem flowed smoothly and took me there in my mind's eye.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest.
Sally :)
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Comment Written 28-Dec-2019
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Sally, thanks you very much for the positive review and comments, soar on the winds of life?s warm currents this weekend. J
