Within Her Depths
5-7-5 Ocean Poem2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the rhyme.
-Effective personification
of the ocean, and the
images of "her secrets
and treasure."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is
good, along with the rhyme.
-Effective personification
of the ocean, and the
images of "her secrets
and treasure."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this short piece. Appreciate your dropping by to read and review!
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You are very welcome!
Comment from Debbie Pope
Well every word of your poem is certainly true. For me, the ocean has provided immeasurable pleasure over my lifetime. Nothing renews, relaxes, and excites like a trip to the ocean or a cruise. As to the secrets and treasures, I'm counting on the ocean's depths to provide medical relief in the upcoming decades.
This is a nice poem. I think that you nailed it.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Well every word of your poem is certainly true. For me, the ocean has provided immeasurable pleasure over my lifetime. Nothing renews, relaxes, and excites like a trip to the ocean or a cruise. As to the secrets and treasures, I'm counting on the ocean's depths to provide medical relief in the upcoming decades.
This is a nice poem. I think that you nailed it.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Debbie, for your positive feedback. I love the ocean and all that it has to offer.
