Nightfall
5-7-5 contest entry about night3 total reviews
Comment from May 1
This poem is wonderfully written and fun to read. It creates a very clear image in my mind and I love that. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this great poem.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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This poem is wonderfully written and fun to read. It creates a very clear image in my mind and I love that. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this great poem.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Dear May1, Thank you for your review and compliments.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Nightfall"
A 5-7-5 Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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"Nightfall"
A 5-7-5 Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery
It read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly
Thanks and good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Dear Ricky, Thank you for your compliments and review. Also for your good luck wishes.
Comment from Pantygynt
Working rhyme as a poetic device into these can be difficult. You have a rhyming pair here, which is good. I would have been really impressed had you managed a rhyme over all three. It is there you know.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Working rhyme as a poetic device into these can be difficult. You have a rhyming pair here, which is good. I would have been really impressed had you managed a rhyme over all three. It is there you know.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Dear Pantygynt, Thank you for your review and compliment, I'll try to rhyme all three in my next 5-7-5!
