Today's Trials
Contest entry9 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
I've read several of the poems for this contest. This is the first that I've run across that has every word start with 't'. Well done.
The message is thought-provoking. It does take a lot of trust when one has been hurt.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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I've read several of the poems for this contest. This is the first that I've run across that has every word start with 't'. Well done.
The message is thought-provoking. It does take a lot of trust when one has been hurt.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, WJD. Yes, I thought for sure more people would do the same but I guess they didn't want to try that hard. Lol. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes, Debi. I'm glad you liked my little alliteration piece. Have a great night.
Ron
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow, dude -- you went all out didn't you?!! T's to the tippy top!! ;) :) What a wonderful offering for the contest that more than fulfilled the 'T' requirement and makes a bold and true statement many should heed!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Wow, dude -- you went all out didn't you?!! T's to the tippy top!! ;) :) What a wonderful offering for the contest that more than fulfilled the 'T' requirement and makes a bold and true statement many should heed!! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 06-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2020
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Thank you, Yvette. Yeah, I though for sure more folks would go the all T route but I guess they didn't want to even try. Lol. I always appreciate the gracious stars and great reviews, Y. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Thank you again. Have a wonderful night.
Ron
Comment from LyndaS
So how many "T" words did you have to list out and then create this? Nicely crafted, Mr. Skulls. A strong message presented beautifully. I like how you took this challenge to the max. Well done, Sir. I hope you kick it in the booth. Lynda
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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So how many "T" words did you have to list out and then create this? Nicely crafted, Mr. Skulls. A strong message presented beautifully. I like how you took this challenge to the max. Well done, Sir. I hope you kick it in the booth. Lynda
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Wow, thank you so much for the sixer, Lynda. Lol, yes, I had a few words sprawled out in front of me. It wasn't an easy task to pull off, that's for sure. I'm glad you liked my little offering, Lynda. Thank you again.
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Ron
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Any thyme. 😉
Comment from Gloria ....
I really love the artwork you've used, Ron. Is this one of your own? It's always nice to finally reach the apex because then you get to see all the rest of mountain tops.
Superb entry into this contest written to specs with lots of T words.
Many thanks for participating in FanStory's 20th Anniversary. Maybe we'll be around for another 20?
Great luck to you in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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I really love the artwork you've used, Ron. Is this one of your own? It's always nice to finally reach the apex because then you get to see all the rest of mountain tops.
Superb entry into this contest written to specs with lots of T words.
Many thanks for participating in FanStory's 20th Anniversary. Maybe we'll be around for another 20?
Great luck to you in the voting booth. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the great review and for throwing the contest, Gloria. Had to work my brain for this one. Lol. The picture is two different pics that I played with in my art program. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have a great day. Cheers to another 20 years.
Ron
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Great photo/illustration to help support this T alliterative poem. And how amazing you used a T in nearly every syllable. I heard quite a bit of 's' consonance with Tears, trace, trials, tomorrow's, times. It sounds like this is a philosophical poem, too, or a feeling one, where trust after tears will help transcend or survive trials.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Great photo/illustration to help support this T alliterative poem. And how amazing you used a T in nearly every syllable. I heard quite a bit of 's' consonance with Tears, trace, trials, tomorrow's, times. It sounds like this is a philosophical poem, too, or a feeling one, where trust after tears will help transcend or survive trials.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Crystie. Yep, it's philosophical. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I created the picture out of two different pictures I found on Google. I'm glad you liked this little piece. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is wonderful. The meaning, and the alliteration of all the "'T" words, are both very well done. I can't imagine writing something so meaningful and clever, in the constraints of a contest, asking for a mere 20 syllables with the letter "T" at all. Well written and very timely.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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This is wonderful. The meaning, and the alliteration of all the "'T" words, are both very well done. I can't imagine writing something so meaningful and clever, in the constraints of a contest, asking for a mere 20 syllables with the letter "T" at all. Well written and very timely.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Wow, thank you for the fantastic review and big sixer, Jesse. I really appreciate the kind words and for noticing how much work actually went into this piece. It didn't come easily, that's for sure. Lol. Thank you again, Jesse. You made my night. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Ron
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Hi Ron.
It was my pleasure to read and review your poem. The positive review and six star rating are well deserved. I am glad I made your night. It feels good to be appreciated for my review. Have a wonderful Sunday.
Jesse
Comment from Sally Law
You did a great job taking the t theme all the through this one, dear dragon poet. A clever and inspirational offering for the contest. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sally xo
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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You did a great job taking the t theme all the through this one, dear dragon poet. A clever and inspirational offering for the contest. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sally xo
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thank you so much for the gracious stars and kind words, Sally. I'm glad you liked my little offering. I hope you have a wonderful new year.
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Ron
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and
presentation, Ron.
-The syllable count is
good, and you definitely
included objects and
words that begin with 't'.
-I also like the message
in your poem about trust
for "tomorrow's trying times."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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-Good image and
presentation, Ron.
-The syllable count is
good, and you definitely
included objects and
words that begin with 't'.
-I also like the message
in your poem about trust
for "tomorrow's trying times."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the kind review, Pam. I actually created the picture from 2 different Google Images. I dearly appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the little piece. Have a wonderful new year, Pam.
Ron
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You are very welcome, Ron. Thanks for sharing about the picture. It was very good, along with the poem. New Year wishes are also appreciated.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is alliteration run riot. Every word's a T starter. One point though, the plural subject 'tears' requires a plural verb 'take' rather than the singular form 'takes' that you have here.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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This is alliteration run riot. Every word's a T starter. One point though, the plural subject 'tears' requires a plural verb 'take' rather than the singular form 'takes' that you have here.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2020
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Thank you for the great review and for the pointing out the goof, Pantygynt. I wasn't really sure how that went. I fixed it. I really appreciate the help and stars, friend. Have a great weekend.
Ron
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Glad to have been of service.
