Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count and
use of one continuous
thought is effective.
-Good use of alliteration
and imagery.
-I like the last line with
"spark my scribbles."
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2020

Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya

reply by Pam (respa) on 11-Jan-2020

You are welcome, zanya.

Comment from RShipp

Excellent

One's muse never seems to adhere to clocks!

Trying to keep a somewhat 'normal' schedule while writing in a 'normal' household can be very frustrating.

Job well done.

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020

Thanks for reading zanya